[Fruitbat]

I think I am about done with this pic. There are still a few palces I don't really like though. I have been working on it on and off for a few weeks in my spare time. I didn't design the Robots, they were done by a friend of mine (I included the base sketch.) I am curious if anyone has any little finsihing touches that might spice it up in some way I haven't thought of.

Thanks in Advance.




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[Hyperi0n]

woah!awsome!

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Hyperi0n

"Look far,dream far,have fun while you're doing it."

[Icannon]

nice!
only problem i think is that there are a lot of dark areas hiding some vital parts of the image. the robots legs and other important forms are hard to make out.. the sketch clears things up a little, but it shouldn't have to

[amnesia]

I needed the line art to figure out that it wasn't all one mech!!
Nice glowy metal texture.

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[Jenn]

Damn nice !

Got a personal galleru?

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DarkChyld

[Spectra]

-Lots of detail with sharp edge, I like the yellow head full of bullets.
-The sketch is well done with clean line not like many with 23745324 sketching line ...
-With out the sketch we dont see the other mech. But the image is not necessarly to dark, it depends of the story setting, if we are supposed or not to see the other mech.

-Spectra
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You learn and get better at each draw you do. So persevere and one day you will draw like dhabih.

[This message has been edited by Spectra (edited November 12, 2000).]

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[Fruitbat]

Thanks guys. I will try to work out a few more shapes inside it.

[LeoDeBruyn]

You might try getting a tiny bit or rim lighting in behind some parts of the mechs, to separate them where they get really unclear. But don't overdo, naturally.

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