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Chapel
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 Posted: Tue Nov 28, 2000 12:47 am |
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Finally, someone else sees the eyebrows. 
The artist is Robert Hunter. His site seems a little slow. He only has a few pics up. I like most of his linework. http://redrival.com/robsdraw/ |
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Skyraider
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| Posted: Wed Nov 29, 2000 10:27 am |
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hmm... it is perhaps personal, but I like the ink version better.
I think the color of the legs and boots could be blended more (like her shirt).
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Seraphire
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| Posted: Wed Nov 29, 2000 1:20 pm |
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No one else is mentioning it...
When you edited the inked version I think you made a mistake with the jewel. Forgot to make a layer visible or something. Unless its supposed to look like that?
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Chapel
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| Posted: Wed Nov 29, 2000 1:39 pm |
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| Yeah.. I thought about it, but I decided not to touch it since Serge filled it in. Like I said though... I liked the pencil version better. I'm not happy with this pic anymore. I see alot of mistakes. |
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Chapel
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| Posted: Thu Nov 30, 2000 5:28 am |
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Thought you guys might like to see a different version. This one is by Jennifer Chan. She is a colorist for Dreamwave Productions. (same company as Vo). She worked on the comic Dark Minds Vol. 2. Anyways, I'm trying to get her to show up at this forum. 
Her homepage is: http://www.skratch-pad.com/
[This message has been edited by Chapel (edited November 30, 2000).] |
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Jaymo
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| Posted: Thu Nov 30, 2000 5:54 am |
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| Lines work best in the last one IMO, still I like the first best. Good work! |
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jamiem
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| Posted: Thu Nov 30, 2000 6:26 am |
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I like Jennifer's take on the image best. I enjoy her muted but well defined colours. Her line work also has wonderful weighting, wheras in the other two the lines are of a fairly constant weight. They're all quite nice, though.
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Chapel
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| Posted: Thu Nov 30, 2000 6:32 am |
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| Um... its the same linework. |
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JLunar
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| Posted: Thu Nov 30, 2000 7:27 am |
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hehehe... thanks kids, and yes, it's the exact same line work. This one has the inks on it. there's a second version with only the pencils here:
http://www.skratch-pad.com/float/cinder2.jpg
I consider this one the more final version, as I've fixed some shadow anomolies and whatnot. I can always post a version wi th the inks, but I've been lazy. ^^
Jen :)
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Chapel
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| Posted: Thu Nov 30, 2000 7:48 am |
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Jen: Yeah I like the pencils much better in my opinion. I like the cast shadows you used.
Be sure to introduce yourself to the forum in your own post!
Click on "*UBB Code is ON" to see how to post pics when you post. |
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JLunar
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| Posted: Thu Nov 30, 2000 7:52 am |
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Hehehe... I will, Chapel.. I will... I just like to lurk alot. ^^
And I'm just not used to posting this many images in a thread O_O we're never allowed to anywhere else...
Thaanks!
Jen :)
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Chapel
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| Posted: Thu Nov 30, 2000 8:00 am |
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| No problem. I sent you an email of who to check out on this forum. I didn't list everyone, but those are the top dogs. (And know nobody else can see my list...hehe) |
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jamiem
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| Posted: Thu Nov 30, 2000 8:36 am |
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Heh, guess it is the same linework. My mistake. In that case, then, I think Jen's colouring supports the line better. 
Nice pic, regardless.
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