[Zenzuke]

After a couple of attempts I've decided to change the perspective of my face to a face-on view, so it's easier now. This is the sketch, please comment before I move on to the final version. At first I tried to look myself in a mirror for reference, but I'm not scary enought Tons of thanks in advance.

[JayBee]

I'm probably the worst person to answer this, but I just noticed something I wanted to point out - I think you want to have more movement shown in the top of the head.

Try something. Cover the lower part of the face with your hand (from bottom of the nose down) Now look at what's left.

Question - can you tell he's shouting? You should be able to tell someone's expression from the eyes, and I think that's what's missing from this. If you cover the mouth, it just looks like a regular portrait. Get yourself a mirror and yell into it. If you can, cover your mouth and concentrate on what the top of your face (eyes, forehead, ears) is doing, and try and capture that.

The pic looks good apart from that, tho - post an update when you get round to it!

*hopes that all made sense!*




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[LethargicBoy]

whoa! that's an awesome trick, i'mm going to remember that one jaybee

[Zenzuke]

I've done a lot of retouching now, and I think that the image is now complete. Please, give me some feedback, it won't hurt you

[Binke]

heh that reminds me of Joachim's screaming pic.
The mouth is a little off, and the nose could use some work.


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[EviLToYLeT]

Hehe... looks like optimus' screaming pic repaint.but anyway, bery nice pic. Just that the ear is a bit lower than it's supposed to be. it should start above the eye and end just about where the nose is if i remember accurately. But really nice colors that you used. Like the detailed teeth.