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Chapel
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 01, 2000 5:54 pm     Reply with quote
Alright.. last attempt. A little brighter than my last attempt, but I think it looks better. Third times the charm??



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PostPosted: Fri Dec 01, 2000 6:38 pm     Reply with quote
lookin' good Chap, lookin' good. Very nice subtle lighting from the left. Just nice enough to distinguish, but not too much to be over powering. The only thing I'd say is to carry over the nice warm tones from the left to the front of the right arm. And that's a minor thing. I very much like this one, Chap. I was looking back at the first, and see alot of progression. good stuff.

Jen :)

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PostPosted: Fri Dec 01, 2000 6:41 pm     Reply with quote
I'm not sure what you mean by the arms. Do you mean put some warm tones on the arm on the right of the picture?

Edit: I think I see what you mean and I tried to correct it. Refresh!

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PostPosted: Fri Dec 01, 2000 6:53 pm     Reply with quote
I like that one very much Chapel. Definite improvements and I like your color choices on this one as well.

Now, time for beer

[EDIT] Do you mind if I put that up on my site?

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Chapel
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 01, 2000 6:55 pm     Reply with quote
Sure FE! I'd be honored.

I think I'm going to mutilate Francis's sequential page next.
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Chapel
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PostPosted: Sat Dec 02, 2000 12:00 am     Reply with quote
Think this thread is interesting... you should see the emails Rinaldo sent me bashing my technique.. man I didn't think they used words like that in his country. I was really shocked.

(just kidding Rin)
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PostPosted: Sat Dec 02, 2000 12:04 am     Reply with quote
Been coloring more seriously for about a week im pretty proud of myself right now but we shall have to see how i do in a few weeks. But chapel post more maybe i will learn something and if not i will enjoy them anyhow.
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PostPosted: Sat Dec 02, 2000 5:28 pm     Reply with quote
I'm bumping this back up, because I want some final crits and for everyone to check this random musing: http://www.sijun.com/dhabih/ubb/Forum1/HTML/000731.html
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PostPosted: Sat Dec 02, 2000 7:54 pm     Reply with quote
Hey I thought I would jump on board the andwagon and give it a shot.


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PostPosted: Sat Dec 02, 2000 8:04 pm     Reply with quote
Flexible Elf does have a thread that has all the color variations in it.
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PostPosted: Sat Dec 02, 2000 8:15 pm     Reply with quote
Sorry. I should have read the first message in this thread. I got this thread mixed up with that one.


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PostPosted: Sat Dec 02, 2000 8:25 pm     Reply with quote
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Wrong thread.

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PostPosted: Sat Dec 02, 2000 8:26 pm     Reply with quote
wrong thread
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