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Noctali
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 Posted: Sat Aug 04, 2001 3:59 pm |
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Kira the Gelfling under the rain, crits please, you can post your gelfling...
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Vesuvius
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| Posted: Sat Aug 04, 2001 4:33 pm |
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| very nice pic, and I'm glad there's someone else out there who still loves dark crystal. Henson (sr.) was a god and he had the guts to have dark visions in his fantasy worlds as well as the typical lightheartedness. so original and so vivid. I would be eager to see the skiksies (sp?) in some art. (they're the vulture creatures) but you have a good overall quality to your piece and it feels right, my only crit is the setting/thunderstorm doesn't remind me of the film, so maybe reworking the environment could strengthen it? |
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Dustin Brown
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| Posted: Sat Aug 04, 2001 5:37 pm |
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Also, her hair doesnt look very wet. Nice pic though.
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EBE
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| Posted: Sun Aug 05, 2001 12:48 am |
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...maybe it just started raining a second ago!  |
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Blitz
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| Posted: Sun Aug 05, 2001 2:06 am |
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Im gana give you big props for doing something from The Dark Crystal
WHAT A FUCKING MOVIE hu... 
GOOD PIC, I like how refined she is....But the rain could use some work I think. Its a bit blurry and I think it could be a bit sharper around her head.
SWEET JOB THOUGH |
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Noctali
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| Posted: Sun Aug 05, 2001 2:39 pm |
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| Thanks but Blitz, THIS MOVIE IS THE GREATESET MOVIE and I'm a great fan of Dark Crystal! |
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Imhotep
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| Posted: Sun Aug 05, 2001 7:57 pm |
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| I love the art, everything is awesome!!! On technical problem though, rain falls in the same direction. So it should all be going down and too the left. Other then that it's really cool!!! And yeah, hair could look a bit more wet . |
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patrick
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| Posted: Mon Aug 06, 2001 8:28 am |
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I liked Dark Crystal too, but thought the gelflings faces should have exhibited more expression.
Blitz, its from the same movie that gave us,
"That's Razelle? I expected something more grand, less..."
"Fuzzy??"
"Fuzzy!" |
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Wireframe
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| Posted: Mon Aug 06, 2001 8:32 am |
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| the problem I see with the rain is that there is none of it appearing to hit Kira. there is the usual haze around her, but the rain seems to stop all around her person. If some drops were actually hitting her, and also in front of her, i.e. between the viewers eyes and Kira it would look a lot more realistic. |
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