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Tatiana junior member
Member # Joined: 31 Jul 2001 Posts: 33
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Posted: Thu Aug 09, 2001 8:53 am |
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This is the same picture I posted here earlier, but I got some helpful comments on her stitches, and have since redone them.<P>  |
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BlackPool member
Member # Joined: 11 Apr 2001 Posts: 157 Location: Dallas, TX
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Posted: Thu Aug 09, 2001 10:10 am |
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That looks very nice and aside from it being technically well done, it is very thought provoking which I like a lot.
The only thing I would suggest is to add redness around her mouth. Like when you get your body pierced, that areas turns a pinkish color. |
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Radiater member
Member # Joined: 09 Mar 2001 Posts: 331 Location: Vancouver, B.C.
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Posted: Thu Aug 09, 2001 1:18 pm |
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Hi Tatiana,
That really is an improvement over your previous stitching. I must agree with Blackpool, you need some red in there. To show the trauma of poking a hole in the skin to sew the threads.
I still think your hair could use some more definition.
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edible snowman member
Member # Joined: 12 Sep 2000 Posts: 998
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Posted: Thu Aug 09, 2001 2:06 pm |
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i think the stitched closed mouth is getting a little old. i like the rest of the painting. |
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