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Tatiana
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PostPosted: Thu Aug 09, 2001 8:53 am     Reply with quote
This is the same picture I posted here earlier, but I got some helpful comments on her stitches, and have since redone them.<P>
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BlackPool
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PostPosted: Thu Aug 09, 2001 10:10 am     Reply with quote
That looks very nice and aside from it being technically well done, it is very thought provoking which I like a lot.

The only thing I would suggest is to add redness around her mouth. Like when you get your body pierced, that areas turns a pinkish color.
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Radiater
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PostPosted: Thu Aug 09, 2001 1:18 pm     Reply with quote
Hi Tatiana,

That really is an improvement over your previous stitching. I must agree with Blackpool, you need some red in there. To show the trauma of poking a hole in the skin to sew the threads.

I still think your hair could use some more definition.

Radiater.
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edible snowman
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PostPosted: Thu Aug 09, 2001 2:06 pm     Reply with quote
i think the stitched closed mouth is getting a little old. i like the rest of the painting.
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