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Mime
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 Posted: Tue Jan 22, 2002 4:20 pm |
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Its a thing i did for a school assignment where we had to have a 4 panel comic where a character was following trails and eventually discovering something
the scan is quite crappy, and i know there isnt enough contrast ... i wont do the same mistake for the next assignment
crits and comments are welcome
[ January 23, 2002: Message edited by: Mime ] |
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| Posted: Wed Jan 23, 2002 9:54 am |
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i edited the title, i guess it was a mistake to say it was stupid, misleading people into thinking it was not worth seeing  |
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| Posted: Wed Jan 23, 2002 4:54 pm |
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he has the bra in his hand in the second panel
for the shirt ... i know, i know
and i also know that its stupid that she is wearing her pants in the last panel, she should be completely naked ... |
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Tarandon
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| Posted: Thu Jan 24, 2002 12:43 am |
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The opening Cell looks like a scene from the never ending story. When the universe gets destroyed and only the castle remains...
Im gonna boo your nudity, especially considering he only finds panties but her shirt and bra are missing...
But I like the idea that she's got guns pointed at him.(no punn intended.)
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