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Author   Topic : "manga about love =)"
Alexei Samokhin
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PostPosted: Wed Feb 06, 2002 10:05 am     Reply with quote
hello gyus.
here is small manga =)


crit welcome ^_^
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Kuren
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PostPosted: Wed Feb 06, 2002 10:12 am     Reply with quote
I think I see some white pixel artifacts in the frames around the panels, me thinks you're using the lasso tool to isolate your coloring areas. Me thinks you should check out our tutorials:

Genesoul.net tutorials

Other than that, the guy's anatomy up top seems a bit whacky. His arm seems a bit short, and his hand looks a bit bloated and blurred. Probably due to your coloring technique. As well as making your line work more clear and clean, it's probably due to your technique.

I like the eye in the middle of the page.
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Alexei Samokhin
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PostPosted: Wed Feb 06, 2002 11:25 am     Reply with quote
Kuren , thx alot for crit and link !!
me think you a good man :-)
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