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dr . bang · Posted: Fri Jun 13, 2003 3:17 am

I've spamed this at eatpoo and i've spam it here too. sorry Sad

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I'm supposed to do an intepretation of a title "Your and the world, your world"

Here it is, the most idioitic picture ever. I didnt like most of the thing in this picture, the only think i like is the glass of milk i've dranked while painting this.

I want to share this with you, c&c are vely welcome!

here are the steps

http://home.wanadoo.nl/emviet/wdksteps.jpg

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ceenda · member Member # Joined: 27 Jun 2000 Posts: 2030

Bang, this is awesome!

Only thing that comes to mind is that the main colours (purple, grey-green and the reddish brown) seem to be very saturated and seperate.

But the details are tight. Very Happy

Svanur · Posted: Fri Jun 13, 2003 4:26 am

I just gotta ask.

Were you applying for this school http://wdka.hro.nl ?
Willem De Kooning Academie

I was applying for that school and got the same project. If you think yours was crappy then I better shoot myself.
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[666]Flat · Posted: Fri Jun 13, 2003 4:32 am

The skyline looks interesting and full of details, the color scheme is pretty ga^H^H^H^dreary tho. Oh, and it lacks of HOT BONDAGE ACTION. Better take care of this next time.

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jasonN · Posted: Fri Jun 13, 2003 6:20 pm

Hey Bang, this is a really great pic, I like the attention to detail and the neat style you have going on! How did you do the windows in the buildings??

My only crit is that maybe there could have been more buildings in the distance to make the city feel even larger. But great stuff nonetheless!

Tzan · Posted: Sat Jun 14, 2003 7:12 am

I like all of it but the large "S". It looks top heavy. Its a very noticable detail because its bright and large, so the top heavyness is even more noticable. Stick your thumb over it, blocking it out. Then remove you thumb. All the other logos are perfect. The S just seems a little too imperfect.

I love those angry buildings looking at us from the distance Smile

Yuri · member Member # Joined: 02 Mar 2003 Posts: 73

Wow very nice and very interesting concept too. =) I like the fact that there are even some outlines in the background... wow, must be some really heavy smog or something. Or the buildings are really tall and the guy's high up in the air.

About the $ sign, it kinda stands out so how about lightening it a little?

And I totally dig the "platform" he's standing on. I can't call it a piece of ground 'cos he's not standing on ground, so it's platform yeah. What I'm curious is how someone would be able to construct it since it looks like it's floating in the air. Razz

Btw, it would be fun to probably add in a couple of birds(just j/k Very Happy

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CwStone · Posted: Sat Jun 14, 2003 7:10 pm

yea tha's pretty cool. I like the lil coke, mcdonalds, nike, and cnn advertisements u got goin on there....and..the money sign...i dont know if thats an advertisement...u no, i havent seen any business with a symbol like that... 'cept that alias show..anyway pretty cool. And that all the buildings farther off seem as tho they got eyes. Tha's also cool. Very nice.
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Drew · Posted: Sat Jun 14, 2003 7:19 pm

I like it better when I cover up everything below the painter's feet. I think the colors down there aren't integrated into the paiting very well. They feel out of place.

Max · Posted: Sun Jun 15, 2003 1:14 am

I like it. It's very interesting.

dr . bang · Posted: Mon Jun 16, 2003 4:35 am

Ceenda: You're very right about my color and saturation problem. I've have had it for a long time now and its getting better, but apparently not good enough.

Svanur: YES! That is the school i've applied too and guess what! I just got a mail from them and I GOT IN!!!!! WOOOOH Party! How did you do? Will you be there with me?

Flat: Thanks you man! And btw youre banned from eatpoo.

JasonN: Jason i love you baby! You're always here for me! In every thread i post, you C&C me! Thank you so much for the caring!

Yuri and Tzan:Hehehehe, i didnt notice at all but apparently many people feels the same way so i guess i really did make a mistake! I'll fix it thanks!
Thank you so much for the C&C, i really appreciate it!

CwStone: Its nice that you noticed it man! My works has pay off after all! Its exactly done for your eye Very Happy

Drew: I agree with you there man. The reason why i do so is because the painting HAS tobe at A4 size so i can't really chop off any thing Smile

Max: Thanx!!!1111
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Yuri · member Member # Joined: 02 Mar 2003 Posts: 73

Ah, heck, dude. It's not something that big of a problem. Razz

Just a slight fix will do, I guess.

Awetopsy · Posted: Mon Jun 16, 2003 7:05 am

Bang, I like It.

nuff said.

Bg · Posted: Mon Jun 16, 2003 5:59 pm

Lookin good Bang! The best I've seen from you so far, the concept is very interesting. My compaints are pretty much the things Ceenda mentioned, the colour scheme could be more unified so it serves the composition better. The foreground looks dry (lack of reflected light) while it's misty (or even raining?) on the city further away.. fixing (= adding reflections) that connects the BG and FG better. I eliminated most of the red in the overpaint and added some mist to the middleground buildings too. I think you nailed the values on the figure very well, I wouldn't change it a bit.
The detailed buildings looked great as separate elements, but as a whole it doesn't work as well as a bit more simplified buildings would (especially on the sides & near the top). The use of reversed saturation gave a nice touch to the pic, unsaturated near the camera and high saturation far away. Makes the city look uneasy while the painter looks calm so he's really taking the time to paint the cityscape. That's all I can translate to words at 5 am, the overpaint should help understand any miscommunications.

The burning sun is rising and my skin doesn't like it, Dracula needs some rest now Wink

See ya! Looking forward to see more chicks.. err.. I mean pics from you hehe

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ken · Posted: Tue Jun 17, 2003 2:22 am

woah, excellent paintover, timo. i couldn't see any flaws in the original, but your version seems to read a lot better. it's also a lot more realistic, which i don't think is what bang was going for - interesting take.

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Enayla · Posted: Tue Jun 17, 2003 3:08 am

Gorgeous, gorgeous painting :] Paintover makes a lot of good points, though Smile

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Tomasis · Posted: Tue Jun 17, 2003 4:32 am

awesome! I like the colours.. soo nice
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dr . bang · Posted: Tue Jun 17, 2003 1:58 pm

Hooly fuck Timmo! Your paintover completely put my work to shit!!!!!! hahahahah! Thanks so much man, i learn alot from it.

From the progress picture, you can see how wrong i work. I work on parts instead of the pictture as a whole and this is the reslt! I learn alesson.

Thanks so much for the writeup on your thought while doing the paitn over. I really appreciate it!

Thansk so muc guys for the comment. I got in two art school because of thsi paitning. WOOOOOOOOHHHHHH!1111
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Mon · Posted: Tue Jun 17, 2003 2:22 pm

Let me be the first to say CONGRATULATIONS!!! Very Happy

Hope you have a great time in art school! Wink

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ReK0 · Posted: Tue Jun 17, 2003 6:25 pm

i like the paintover Twisted Evil

. the first one is very nice but when i saw bg's is seemed more detailed and interesting.
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Yuri · member Member # Joined: 02 Mar 2003 Posts: 73

Congrats, dude!

Enjoy your time! Smile

Svanur · Posted: Wed Jun 18, 2003 8:00 am

Dr. Bang: Still waiting for an answer but congratulations, have a few friends there and they have nothing but good to say about it. Hope I can get into it too, since there will be Sijuners there Smile

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