[daryl]

I thought of giving it one more go, hoping for some feedback. Im not feeling very well about it, maybe it took too long to work on, even tho its not all that polished. anyhow, comments are welcome.

[Bars]

No feedback, means only one thing - no critics IMHO I love it, good technique and great dark atmosphere. May be a bit more detail on center figure? Whats original size of the picture?
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[Misc]

Very nice! I like the dark atmosphere.
Minor things, imo:
The background looks a bit repetitive (the heads), maybe some gaps, or variation in size of the figures could help..
The guy riding the dino (up left) look a bit stiff, and it almost looks like he's got two hands on the sword, but no left arm..
anyway, good work, nice poses.

[daryl]

bars: thanks man, much appreciated =) yeah the main character prolly should have bit more detail. image is resized 1:3.

misc: thank you!
true about the heads, I grew too tired and couldnt get away with it.
I made the dino guy with intention to use his both hands, but from this angle I guess his left one should be visible.

thanks again!

[frantic]

very good use of tones, and good action...

love it.
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[funkbuttah]

over all I think it's a good piece, I do agree with the repetition comment and the stiffness of the dino dude. It would be cool to see the sillouette of other riders of dinos and what not in the bg and even though it's dark, you could have some color in there. unless your intention is a grey scale piece. I think the main dude has great energy.