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EraserX
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PostPosted: Sat Dec 17, 2005 12:33 am     Reply with quote
This is for a pitch I'm working on with a novelist. I'm hoping he'll let me color it, but if you guys have any thoughts on the lines, I'm all ears.


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PostPosted: Sat Dec 17, 2005 10:49 am     Reply with quote
The lines on the kids look great.

I'd add more weight to the closer buildings on the left hand side, however. The perspective for the two buildings on the level above them looks a little strange as well.
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