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red com · Posted: Tue Nov 28, 2000 12:31 am

twisted.. >

A. Mount · Posted: Tue Nov 28, 2000 1:05 am

What was the prompt??

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kimzoll · Posted: Tue Nov 28, 2000 3:34 am

sorry man, cant see the pic

Kim

Matt Elder · Posted: Tue Nov 28, 2000 3:45 am

Interesting image. Looks like a combination of Bryce, Poser and PhotoShop. Two things struck me with the image

1) Colour - the yellow and green in the foreground are far to bright. Your eye is drawn into the image by the green and yellow in the lower half. However your eye doesn't really have anything that stands out to focus upon. Most of the images are behind this green/yellow fog and not clear.

2) Focus - Lets say your attention is caught by one of those wavy lines and is drawn into the center of the image, but the center of your image is cluttered. 3 figures doing something that looks independant of one another.

Then you have the bright yellow at the top that draws your attention but not to any real action. On the outsides you have some interesting concepts, such as the face. You also have something in the lower left hand corner that you can't quite make out and isn't obvious. The red is an interesting contrast.

Probably haven't been really helpful but I just didn't 'get' what your image was about. The image needs to be 'tighter' as at the moment it looks like a Bryce background, Poser models and some PhotoShop touch ups afterwards. There are lots of elements but no real interaction between them or a commonality as to why there are all there. There is emornous potential here and I think with a bit of work, you can really make a fantastic image out of it.

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[This message has been edited by Matt Elder (edited November 28, 2000).]

Bubonic · Posted: Tue Nov 28, 2000 4:58 am

I don't like pictures that use poser models.. I think if your gonna make a 3d image.. Might as well model the human as your own, it may not look perfect, but at least you know its Your Human, not some default manufactured one..

n8 · Posted: Tue Nov 28, 2000 6:27 am

looks like the opera house int he bg..hehe

Poxin · Posted: Tue Nov 28, 2000 10:04 am

It reminds me of Q3

very twisted, i like it

Jenn · Posted: Tue Nov 28, 2000 2:50 pm

Future Scully = Firehouse?

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Shijima · Posted: Wed Nov 29, 2000 9:30 pm

ahhhh i get it.......trippen on acid cool cool

futureskully · Posted: Wed Nov 29, 2000 10:50 pm

Darkchyld ..yeah its one in the same. To others I guess to give what I was trying to do...the image is of adam and eve falling waside as they head towards Jesus...note Adam is falling toward the red faced eyes(satan/nick/devil) and eve is falling toward what she thinks is a reward in a chest etc. I havent played with the picture since I did it but willing to take a stab soon on it...thanks for all the crits and comments...and to all the future comments that come..

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