[Superbug]

Hey. I'd love for you guys to look at these pics and tell me what's goin right, what's going wrong. First up:

This guy is actually holding a rope on an airship...as you see I was influenced by final fantasy...or i hope u can see.



Fairy girl.

[eetu]

hiya

otherwise i definitely like them, but the pose of the upper one seems a bit too 'upright' to me.. lemme see..

the red line down from the spot he's holding to should pass close to his center of gravity..

EDIT: actually now that i look at it, his hand is closer to the center above his head than i first thought, it ain�t that bad after all..

eetu.


[This message has been edited by eetu (edited December 19, 2000).]

[Eorand]

Yo!

Those are some good concepts. But few comments:
Upper ones forehead looks a bit strange, like he has head of a frankenstein
Second remings me somehow about mermaid?Maybe her hip or...

[kimzoll]

hi superbug, I can see you have potiential, ideas look good.
I would advice you to take some lifedrawing classes to get the anatomy and compostion right, its incredible how much it helps, good luck
kim

[Superbug]

EEtu: Thanks man. Yeah, I was kinda thinking too that he looks a bit stiff, but once I complete it, I guess he could be on a the inside of an airship or inner part, so I guess the pull won't effect him so much, as if he were standing on, i dunno, the long pointy end.

Eorand: Yupppers, i see it now. He looks like a munster. I think i'll round the forhead more. thanks

Kimzoll: Actuall for the first picture, I used my bro's anatomy book for proportions and junk of the body. Of course, the second one was me just following my pencil