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Kuzya · Posted: Sun Dec 02, 2001 1:34 am

hello .. this is something i am working on for my gurlfriend..

cc please..

thanks

Gothic Gerbil · Posted: Sun Dec 02, 2001 1:46 am

All the colours you have going on in the wings are pretty interesting. Unfortunately they look more like they're something on the background, and not attached to the girl. I think it is because of the way you have her right wing going, it should probably angle more out and behind her than right beside her, then it would read more clearly as attached to her. Your form is looking pretty good from what I can (blearily) see right now, but the expression makes her look more like a guy and also more like she's drugged out on something. I think the sharp edges you have to the face and especially the straight drop down on the nose is what is making it more masculine than feminine, but maybe that is what you're going for. Her right hand also seems to be missing a finger and some bones. Of course mayhap the fairies you know have only three fingers. That left nipple looks more like it is caved into the breast than poking out like the right nipple, which looks like it might poke someone's eye out. Your lighting also seems to bend at times, like where it is catching her right arm beside her tummy, and the way her right shoulder is catching light there on the edge. I also think the figure is too monochromatic, you should mayhap work some warmer colours into the highlights and cooler colours into the shadows. Well this is all I can think to say at the moment, sorry! Good night!

Kuzya · Posted: Sun Dec 02, 2001 2:27 am

sorry? for what? thats exactly what i needed to hear .. now i can see where are my wrongs .. and i will work on that ... thanks .. =)

and about the lighting and shadow colors well i will work on it after next step .. which is defining background and bakcground colors .. so then i can give her colors of surroundings ..

gnithz..

[Shizo] · member Member # Joined: 22 Oct 1999 Posts: 3938

I would like to see the reference photo :p

Kuzya · Posted: Sun Dec 02, 2001 3:58 am

sorryz man .. no can do .. since the photo is of my gurlie..

'damn shouldnt have said that, oh well...', maybe after the image is fully done.. i might post a reference photo..

[ December 02, 2001: Message edited by: Kuzya ]

A.Buttle · member Member # Joined: 20 Mar 2000 Posts: 1724

Censor the damned photo and then post it.

Kuzya · Posted: Mon Dec 03, 2001 5:20 am

here is more shaded version .. cc please

thanks

afex · Posted: Mon Dec 03, 2001 11:10 am

The "shaded" version looks alot better to me for some reason but you still need to work on smoothing it out, also the face still needs to be redone, still looks like a guy, but without a ref photo there is nothing to base the face on *hint...also her right breast is a little torpeadoed...thinks thats how you spell it?