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hydrid
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 Posted: Wed May 09, 2001 2:21 pm |
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well, a nymph anyway... not necessarily a nympho. This is pretty much how it'll look like when I turn it into my personal site when I go off to college.
Crits, comments, suggestions are all welcome. |
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geoman2k
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| Posted: Wed May 09, 2001 3:05 pm |
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i like it, except that you need to put more texture on the hair... need more hatching and junk. i think theres a tutorial on how to make good-looking hair on www.gameart.com
other than the texture on the hair, i like it a lot |
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Frost
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| Posted: Wed May 09, 2001 3:07 pm |
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"not necessarily a nympho" .. well, it's the thought that counts I guess.  It looks good. |
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hydrid
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| Posted: Wed May 09, 2001 3:31 pm |
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Thanks geoman2k for the tute link. I'm awful with hair. If I could just get over that... I'll see what I can do by tomorrow.
Lol @ frost. Thats the first thing that popped into my mind when I thought she looked sorta like a nymph |
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Collosimo
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| Posted: Wed May 09, 2001 10:33 pm |
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Nice... love the choice of colours.., I'm always saying 'love the colours'...
Anyway they are really nice.. maybe some more polishingup to do, and the hair as mentioned. |
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Poprocksz
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| Posted: Wed May 09, 2001 10:47 pm |
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i think you should've at least added one arm.
It would add to the depth of the pic.
other than that it's good as a pin-up. |
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Poprocksz
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| Posted: Wed May 09, 2001 10:47 pm |
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i think you should've at least added one arm.
It would add to the depth of the pic.
other than that it's good as a pin-up. |
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Dives
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| Posted: Thu May 10, 2001 12:08 pm |
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| well i think the head is way too big compared to the torso and you obviouls have trouble drawing hands since you hid them behind her.. the picture is ok in general |
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hydrid
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| Posted: Thu May 10, 2001 3:43 pm |
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Actually, I don't have much of a problem with hands. I just sort of wanted her peeping out at you sort of mischeviously and I would know exactly where her arms would go. The primary problem with putting limbs in here is the fact that I need room for content area while maintaining a 800x600 compatible site. I would have needed to narrow the space where the actual info was.
I can try lengthen the amount of satiny dress... once again, I was seeing things in the 800x600 dimension so I wasn't paying much attention to the length of her torso. Ah well, I will work on it a bit.
Thanks for the crits. The hair is still super tough |
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