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B0b
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My GF little boys 3rd bday soon, going for cowboys and indians theme, this will when finished b on the invites..
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Inspector Lee
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| Posted: Tue Nov 19, 2002 11:40 am |
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I like it, nice clean colors for easy printing. My only crit: what happened to the rest of the horses stick?
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| Posted: Wed Nov 20, 2002 5:36 am |
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its behind the figure..
after looking at the pic, i'm changing the face as the current 1 i feel isn't quite right.. |
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| Posted: Wed Nov 20, 2002 5:55 am |
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I agree with Inspector Lee, I think the stick should appear behind the boy. Or if not, change the perspective of the stick, with the angle it is right now it looks as if the stick is 2-3 feet long, imho.
About the face, I agree with you, he has a somehow bitter expression. Maybe try with a photo where he's smiling? (and apply the way he smiles, I don't mean to change the whole painting).
Anyways, I think it looks very good and would fit nicely in a invitation.
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Matthew
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| Posted: Wed Nov 20, 2002 8:28 am |
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great piece.
Is the lines made with computer or inked?
have a nice day
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| Posted: Wed Nov 20, 2002 10:20 am |
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all 100% photoshopped the new brush engine in 7 is an amazing addition to the program
i've updated the pic
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Matthew
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| Posted: Wed Nov 20, 2002 11:04 am |
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yup
Supernice with improvements.
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Inspector Lee
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| Posted: Wed Nov 20, 2002 12:17 pm |
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Nice improvement in the face. The softer, more delicate lines work much better since it's a childs face.
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Ragnarok
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| Posted: Wed Nov 20, 2002 1:25 pm |
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Good improvements.
I still feel the face looks a bit bitter, though.
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B0b
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| Posted: Wed Nov 20, 2002 1:30 pm |
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yeah i'm not happy with the face :/
but inbetween trying to get my system up and running again after Micro$haft IE 6 ate my system and wont give it back and other work i've not had alot of time to work on it :/
rite time to go home c u in the morning with what i hope is the finished face
thanx 4 the C&C |
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Godwin
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| Posted: Wed Nov 20, 2002 5:08 pm |
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well u cant really get a good face like what u have in mind without the adequate shades, u seem to be heading to use as little colours as possible, so u cant really bring out the features or hide features
btw, very nice
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B0b
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| Posted: Thu Nov 21, 2002 4:40 am |
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ok i've done as much as have time to do its now officially finished
found on the Gallery/Finished Work |
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