[EL Chief]

hi. this is my latest try. hope, it isn't too bad...
c&c welcome

thx & greets

[Bare Bonez]

Salute

She makes me blush 'cause she's not wearing much.

There's a lot to comment here, but I'm sure you know what they are. Anatomy needs work, but just keep on drawing and I think you'll figure it out.

The biggest issue I see with most beginners is lack of tone. The range of tones is what makes a 2-dimensional drawing look 3-dimensional. This is why the girl looks "out standing" in the picture . She doesn't seem to be apart of the environment, but appears to be infront of the environment.

The hair on the boots look nice and the texturing on the bricks are well done, but I can't really comment on those because I have no knowledge of texturing.. but it looks right to me.

Anyway, keep drawing.
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[zap.br]

.. humm .. nice iluminatiosn ..
but her face are strange .. something in anatomy are not good too

but .. i like the fur in her legs ..

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[EL Chief]

@Bare Bonez
i had no referenz for the anatomy and you're right, but i'll keep working.
i checked the values (tones?) frequently against a greyscale-version, and it looked quite well there, but with color, she's a little bit too shiny...and there we have the lack of tones. but anyway, just another milestone concerning my skills

@zap.br
yeah the face. don't know why but i like it that way. maybe i look at it again in a few days and see the mistake too

i thank both of you for your constructive comments

greets

[EL Chief]

here's another one, about one month old

world downfall

[DL-44]

She has something that you rarely see in posts here - REALISTIC breasts.

Nice work.

Overall the anatomy is pretty well done. There are, of course, some discrepanices but nothing too terrible. The level of detail could use a boost however...there's just not much going on.

All in all a pretty decent piece.

[Ng Mui]

nice shiney helmet!

[EL Chief]

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