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BaeNae
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PostPosted: Sat May 10, 2003 10:37 am     Reply with quote

heyho what u think u guys???
any suggestions?

PS: schneewittchen is the german name for cinderella
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AndyT
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PostPosted: Sat May 10, 2003 11:27 am     Reply with quote
I think
Cinderella = Aschenputtel,
Snow White = Schneewittchen!

It's not the kind of comic I'd read, but I like line weight and composition.
And I think the story comes across just fine.

Did you draw the faces like that intentional?
If that's your style and you keep it up I can't think of anything negative.
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