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sluut the feared
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PostPosted: Wed May 28, 2003 8:44 pm     Reply with quote
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PostPosted: Wed May 28, 2003 11:35 pm     Reply with quote
I like the perspective. Wicked
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PostPosted: Thu May 29, 2003 2:15 am     Reply with quote
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PostPosted: Thu May 29, 2003 7:13 pm     Reply with quote
Hey, I like it Sluut the Feared. What you could do is put blood all over the guys hands and I think maybe you could either do a blue sky or a dark sky with stars and a moon or something. Or maybe put a couple skyscrapers in the background. Hope this helps.
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PostPosted: Fri May 30, 2003 12:08 pm     Reply with quote
I see the potential for a really cool/funny final product here. It's too early to say you don't like it. The thing makes me dizzy to look at it, which is at least one of the things one might feel while laying on the ground and looking up at a giant man in a kilt carrying a sledgehammer. Criticism? How about "suggestion"? In the first version, it looks like the attacker is diving, in which case the hammer will come down somewhere below the viewer's (victim's?) waist. Of course this requires a bit of thought and supposition on velocity, direction, and the like. To change this to a more static pose, I'd do the following:



I'd also add a bit more forearm foreshortening. The left hand is looking great, as is the right, if only a little harder to see. Think about adding some highlights to make it stand out from the arm. Oh, and ignore my shading. It's not meant to be dead-on accurate, just to hint at volume.

As you can tell, I'm pretty new here as well, so take my suggestions with an according level of weight. Keep working on this. I want to see the final product.
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