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sluut the feared junior member
Member # Joined: 28 May 2003 Posts: 8 Location: Oklahoma
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Posted: Wed May 28, 2003 8:44 pm |
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Atrophy member
Member # Joined: 05 Apr 2003 Posts: 68 Location: Glendale, Arizona, USA
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Posted: Wed May 28, 2003 11:35 pm |
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I like the perspective. Wicked _________________ 'why', is all I hear in my mind,
as I try to stop crying inside, but die trying...
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sluut the feared junior member
Member # Joined: 28 May 2003 Posts: 8 Location: Oklahoma
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Posted: Thu May 29, 2003 2:15 am |
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Immortal_Souls member
Member # Joined: 08 Apr 2003 Posts: 66 Location: Adelaide Australia
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Posted: Thu May 29, 2003 7:13 pm |
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Hey, I like it Sluut the Feared. What you could do is put blood all over the guys hands and I think maybe you could either do a blue sky or a dark sky with stars and a moon or something. Or maybe put a couple skyscrapers in the background. Hope this helps. _________________ Why dont you clone yourself!
-- Why's that?--
So you can go and F*** yourself!!!
*Quote from Arnold Schwartzeneggars movie The 6th Day* |
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sensei77 junior member
Member # Joined: 13 Mar 2002 Posts: 12 Location: IN
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Posted: Fri May 30, 2003 12:08 pm |
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I see the potential for a really cool/funny final product here. It's too early to say you don't like it. The thing makes me dizzy to look at it, which is at least one of the things one might feel while laying on the ground and looking up at a giant man in a kilt carrying a sledgehammer. Criticism? How about "suggestion"? In the first version, it looks like the attacker is diving, in which case the hammer will come down somewhere below the viewer's (victim's?) waist. Of course this requires a bit of thought and supposition on velocity, direction, and the like. To change this to a more static pose, I'd do the following:
I'd also add a bit more forearm foreshortening. The left hand is looking great, as is the right, if only a little harder to see. Think about adding some highlights to make it stand out from the arm. Oh, and ignore my shading. It's not meant to be dead-on accurate, just to hint at volume.
As you can tell, I'm pretty new here as well, so take my suggestions with an according level of weight. Keep working on this. I want to see the final product. _________________ "made for the extrememe priority the good looks" |
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sluut the feared junior member
Member # Joined: 28 May 2003 Posts: 8 Location: Oklahoma
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Posted: Fri May 30, 2003 2:11 pm |
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