| View previous topic :: View next topic |
| Author |
Topic : "i have 2 for u" |
ReK0
member
Member #
Joined: 27 Dec 2001
Posts: 68
Location: BC canada
|
 Posted: Fri Jun 13, 2003 2:34 pm |
 |
 |
first is of a guy..
second is of a chinese dragon diving into a body of water..
_________________
ReK0 ---
--- Simply-Detailed |
|
| Back to top |
|
Kitamard
member
Member #
Joined: 18 Oct 2002
Posts: 187
Location: British Columbia, Canada
|
| Posted: Wed Jun 18, 2003 6:27 am |
|
|
Hello my fellow Canuck. The second one honestly isnt that great... but the first one is good 
_________________
Beaumont 'from the beautiful mountain' origin French |
|
| Back to top |
|
Awetopsy
member
Member #
Joined: 04 Oct 2000
Posts: 3028
Location: Kelowna
|
| Posted: Wed Jun 18, 2003 10:38 am |
|
|
LOL... brutal Kitamard.
Reko: I like the first one too.. but I find I cant tell what the other one is unless you tell me.. |
|
| Back to top |
|
CwStone
member
Member #
Joined: 27 Jan 2003
Posts: 489
Location: New York, USA
|
| Posted: Wed Jun 18, 2003 1:29 pm |
|
|
yea...same as them. I like the first, dont really like the second. Maybe if u make it so that u see the dragon's head coming up from the water, not going down.
_________________
-Chase |
|
| Back to top |
|
Ritaku
member
Member #
Joined: 06 Apr 2003
Posts: 56
Location: uk
|
| Posted: Wed Jun 18, 2003 2:05 pm |
|
|
i dunno people. the first one is a nice concept and style of shading etc, although seems more like a starting point than anything else. i quite like the water effects you got into the second one, although again it feels like its only partially complete. try adding to them both maybe?
_________________
 |
|
| Back to top |
|
GRKboy
junior member
Member #
Joined: 13 Apr 2003
Posts: 15
Location: Los Angeles, CA
|
| Posted: Wed Jun 18, 2003 4:34 pm |
|
|
I have to agree with everyone else. On the second one there is way too much white. It seems very abstract, and if that is what you are looking for, I coud suggest drawing it from the perspective of underneath the dragon [3/4 view], rather than from off to the side. That way you can make it interesting like have the arms "arch into" the composition, emphasising the claws!!
It all has to do with your 'action' there is too much in th upper right, and not enough anywhere else. Spread it out a bit. Make the viewers eyes stay around the image rather than leading off and to the upr right...
Great artwork though!!
_________________
It takes a big man to cry. It takes an even bigger man to laugh at that Man. -J.Handy
www.sketchedmedia.com |
|
| Back to top |
|
ReK0
member
Member #
Joined: 27 Dec 2001
Posts: 68
Location: BC canada
|
| Posted: Fri Jun 20, 2003 9:29 am |
|
|
hey thx. ya i think i might color the first one but i would be experimenting lol. the second is actually unfinished you can tell cause his legs are partually tranparent but i will try to make it look nice if i can.
thanx!
_________________
ReK0 ---
--- Simply-Detailed |
|
| Back to top |
|
|
