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varg · Posted: Thu Jul 03, 2003 4:10 am

Yes,I now its a bit much stylish over this one.
I added the text there for some reason,I like it...It felt to empty.
(And I couldnt make a background that fitted)
So well,,anyway,here it is.Comments are extremly welcome Smile

Repaints are welcome if you come up with any cool bg.

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neff · Posted: Thu Jul 03, 2003 5:31 am

PLEASE define that Picture more, i can hardly see whats going on Shocked

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CwStone · Posted: Thu Jul 03, 2003 5:38 am

i see two guys rolling on the ground wit eachother, the top guy has a gun and is licking the guy on the bottom. Wink

i know its supposed to be abstract, i think u achieved that look well, but yea, i think it could use a bit more definition.
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B0b · Posted: Thu Jul 03, 2003 5:57 am

they have no legs! Wink

Capt. Fred · Posted: Thu Jul 03, 2003 7:49 am

I'd like to be able to agree with CwStone, but I' with NeFF on this one.

I looked at this for a while but I just can't figure out what the hell is going on.

chaplin · Posted: Thu Jul 03, 2003 7:51 am

This can be like one of those puzzles ppl look at and after two hours it comes to them when they cross their eyes =)
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varg · Posted: Thu Jul 03, 2003 9:20 am

haa,noone can see whats going on..Am I realy that bad at drawing? Sad

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Capt. Fred · Posted: Thu Jul 03, 2003 10:34 am

hey! I think i see it now!
Yeah! It's cool Cool

Sorry, yeah, i just came back to this thread and just glanced and saw it, I see it now, yeah, it's cool. nice job.

I like the style allot, I woudn't want you to change that for anything.
I think you need to make the upper head a little more headlike. maybe make the 'ear' a bit more earish becuase I think it'd suck if you properly drew in neat little eyes and mouth.

For clarity, so people aren't confused by you pic, I think you need to break the join between the lower guy and the upper guy's shoulder, and I think you need to break the join between the upper guy's head and his arm.

Maybe add some funked out legs if it won't cramp your style.

Love the hands! especially of the guy whose got a gun against his head.

CwStone · Posted: Thu Jul 03, 2003 11:51 am

oooooohhhhh i see it now! One gangster has two guns, one stickin out to the right and the other to the other guys head. And the other gangster's just kinda, doin nothin cept squirmin. See, what i thought was that the hand of gangsta #1 (the hand holding the gun to the guys head) was gangsta #1's head, therefore making it seem like he was licking gangsta #2 (the gun being the tongue). I dont know why i saw it that way. But u have to admit, gangsta #2's expression does fit the expression of being licked. Inorder to stop ppl from interpreting it this way, make a line seperating gangsta #1's hand from his face. Also, make some sort of nose and mouth for gangsta #1. This will most definatly give people the right idea of the pic.

as i side note, gangsta #1 is the guy on top, and gangsta #2 is on bottom...... man that didnt sound right.
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