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cresendoll
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 Posted: Sat Aug 16, 2003 11:17 am |
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Hi everyone!
Think I have been lurking long enough and I must say I'm quite impressed with the works shown here.
So here comes one of my own.
C & c are very welcome, please tell me what you think.
These two bestfriends do everything together, and they will be much important for eachother in the future 
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eyalyab
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| Posted: Sat Aug 16, 2003 3:47 pm |
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| the figure is very nice, and so are the clouds. dragon looks like its floating on the water. maybe a more picky crit is on the side of the leg that's in the air to make the butt muscle more relaxed if you understand me. |
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CarRyoN
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| Posted: Sun Aug 17, 2003 11:08 am |
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yeah, the legs seem too far spread apart. I would move the left leg a little more to the right and fatten it up a bit (it is smaller than the right leg). Other than that, it is really good. Where is that fishing spot?
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cresendoll
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| Posted: Tue Aug 19, 2003 5:36 am |
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Thanks for the replies eyalyab and CarRyoN!
I'll take those tips and fix up my pic later. Fatten up the left leg, maybe dip the dragon and put some fishies swimming in the water! So they didnt get there for nothing  |
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