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Morholt
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 11, 2003 11:51 am     Reply with quote

Feeble attempt at painting one of the few famous belgian girls I like (look-wise, too bad she's as dumb as a carrot and she only cares for her shoes Smile) : Phaedra Hoste. +/- 1.5h
The ressemblance is missing... so I can use critique ! Thanks Wink
The lips look too flat and the pupil/iris too, but I wasn't able to change em without fucking it up (more than it has been already Smile) and I haven't been able to succesfully paint realistic hair. I should probably go more in-depth in all those nifty tutorials that are listed here.
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sluut the feared
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 11, 2003 4:21 pm     Reply with quote
Hello. The lips and eyes look flat because the shadows and highlights are in the wrong places. Hope you don't mind, but I did a quick paint over to show you.

I'm no expert and I'm usually a man of few words, so I'll just give you a URL to a good tutorial.
http://www.portrait-artist.org/face/lips.html
They can explain it all better than I ever could. Good Luck. Sorry if I'm not very helpful.
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Morholt
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PostPosted: Tue Aug 12, 2003 4:42 am     Reply with quote
Hey, thanks alot ! You've been really helpfull, don't be so modest Wink
i'll try to improve it as soon as possible.
Thanks for your usefull critique and the little paintover !
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