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Byakko-kun · Posted: Sat Jan 17, 2004 4:56 am

Hi! im new here.

I know i cant stand up to any of the better artists in here, but then you can give me loads of crits right ? ^_^ my mom wants to hang this on the wall so im gonna do what i can to make it look as good as possible. Ive use a mechanical pencil for scetch, a 2mm pilot drawing pen for lines and a 5b pencil for shading.

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The Real Mark · Posted: Sat Jan 17, 2004 5:26 am

Yeah that looks great, cool view

What are the dimensions of the paper?

Byakko-kun · Posted: Sat Jan 17, 2004 5:38 am

AndyT · Posted: Sat Jan 17, 2004 5:48 am

The concept looks cool.
But the guy and the insect look like one object somehow.
It's a little hard to see what's going on.
Would be better if the insect thingie was a lot lighter than the guy.
But that's a change you can't make any more I guess Sad

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Byakko-kun · Posted: Sat Jan 17, 2004 2:59 pm

i might add this! the concept was something i saw in a webcomic. Someone made a really big fuzz about this accusing me of stealing so im telling you all here. I used reference for the pose. but only the pose. Everything else is mine.
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