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ExonGep
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Hi guys, i haven't posted here in a long time ago, in a galaxy...ok.
I finished this drawing today and i know this forum is the way to go if you want good and strong critique.
Here it is then:
I have never been critiqued before, that's why i want honest ones cuz i know the drawing isn't perfect.
So thanks in advance. 
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waynebebay
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| Posted: Fri Jan 11, 2008 12:18 am |
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pretty cool man
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neff
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| Posted: Fri Jan 11, 2008 3:58 am |
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On the first view i thought it's Tinusch Style
I like it!
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notic
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| Posted: Fri Jan 11, 2008 4:48 am |
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nice colour scheme!
one thing that strikes me, is that the girl seems to be missing one eye but that's an easy fix! |
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ExonGep
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| Posted: Fri Jan 11, 2008 5:51 am |
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| notic wrote: |
nice colour scheme!
one thing that strikes me, is that the girl seems to be missing one eye but that's an easy fix! |
Yeah, that something i didn't noticed at first but by the time it started bothering me. I'll fix it for sure cuz no one deserves to be an one-eye freak. 
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Naeem
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| Posted: Fri Jan 11, 2008 7:20 pm |
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hey exon! nice work.
yes.. other then the eye, there's also one more then thing that's bothering me. there's tangency on the red robot, where his right arm and right leg meet. it took me a few seconds to figure it out and seperate the two. it seems like one big mechanism. Try moving the yellow joint to another place.
nice work though! |
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waynebebay
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| Posted: Sat Jan 12, 2008 8:08 am |
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| notic wrote: |
nice colour scheme!
one thing that strikes me, is that the girl seems to be missing one eye but that's an easy fix! |
Maybe she's a cyclops
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