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Dakkan
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 Posted: Wed Apr 05, 2000 7:23 pm |
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here's something i scetched up a week or two back, and started colouring 2-3 days ago. it's unfinished, and i plan to put many more hours into it, but just tell me what u think of it so far. thanks. (i've worked on it for aprox. 3 hours already, and is 1600x1200 in resolution). btw, sorry for the large filesize...
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synj
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| Posted: Wed Apr 05, 2000 7:29 pm |
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Dakkon, the lower body i particularly like.
only gripe i have is the arms in relation to the body :/
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[Shizo]
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| Posted: Wed Apr 05, 2000 7:35 pm |
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i wana see the finished pic ;o
nice water reflections BTW!
i give you vodka, comrade, so you can finish the pic faster!
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Golongria
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| Posted: Wed Apr 05, 2000 9:02 pm |
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The right arm is waaaaay too big...my guess is that you were going for a foreshortened look (larger up close, smaller further away), I just think that the way it is crossed, there is no way it could be close enough to the "camera" to be that big.
Hope my blather helped,
-Matt
p.s. I love the face, fire, and her lower body...very nice  |
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Dakkan
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Chapel
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| Posted: Thu Apr 06, 2000 9:53 am |
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Yeah.. nice composition. You need to work on the head in general. Just a tip, but male heads are large and female is small (compared to the body). The face would probably be fine if the head was bigger. Also, you may want to strengthen the jaw area. Small jaw line implies a female or young boy. Hope this makes sense.
Oh.. and the forearm should be twice the size of the head when measured from elbow to fingertips.
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