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  Topic: The Offering (revised)
Richard Allen

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PostForum: Work in Progress   Posted: Thu Nov 15, 2001 6:55 am   Subject: The Offering (revised)
First off, I really like this piece. There are only a couple of suggestions that I could make. First, make the reflections in the eyes sharper, as the eyes are wet and reflections tend to be pronoun ...
 
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