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Topic: The Offering (revised) |
Richard Allen
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Forum: Work in Progress Posted: Thu Nov 15, 2001 6:55 am Subject: The Offering (revised) |
First off, I really like this piece. There are only a couple of suggestions that I could make. First, make the reflections in the eyes sharper, as the eyes are wet and reflections tend to be pronoun ... |
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