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Topic: twisted page |
Sparks
Replies: 11
Views: 2072
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Wed Jul 18, 2001 10:30 pm Subject: twisted page |
I love the artwork, but don't you think you could put a little more work into the words the accompany it? It seems pretty bland to me |
Topic: 2 pic ( Sky & Sea ) |
Sparks
Replies: 11
Views: 2679
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Tue Jul 17, 2001 1:57 pm Subject: 2 pic ( Sky & Sea ) |
WOW! Those are both just amazing! I especially like that 2nd one... the colors work so well! |
Topic: spacey archer type girl inside |
Sparks
Replies: 41
Views: 11425
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Tue Jul 17, 2001 1:46 pm Subject: spacey archer type girl inside |
I lub your shading! Good looking and great texture... everything except for the nose... I'm not really sure why, but it's scary, very scary. Maybe just simplify it a little and make it a little less ... |
Topic: post your zombie (and feedback me) |
Sparks
Replies: 27
Views: 7938
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Sat Jul 14, 2001 3:50 pm Subject: post your zombie (and feedback me) |
Whoa morbid guy... verrrrry nice. He's really got a good look on anguish on his face too |
Topic: Another new guy here with something to show |
Sparks
Replies: 8
Views: 1695
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Mon Jun 25, 2001 9:46 pm Subject: Another new guy here with something to show |
Definately too soft! With the shape of his armor he should have some good lights and darks on there, some break out the airbrush and crank the contrast up on him. He lacks detail too... you could ap ... |
Topic: my bset post yet... |
Sparks
Replies: 4
Views: 1249
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Mon Jun 25, 2001 9:36 pm Subject: my bset post yet... |
Definitely keep working on drawing hands, I know it's hard, and it's something I'm struggling with now too.
You may want to practice drawing some guns from real life that you like, just to understa ... |
Topic: group of jap guys |
Sparks
Replies: 4
Views: 1430
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Forum: Work in Progress Posted: Mon Jun 25, 2001 9:27 pm Subject: group of jap guys |
I haven't been able to place my finger on what it is about this image until now... it looks like something I would have drawn! Really, it's a lot like my style with the folds on the clothes and every ... |
Topic: Anatomy Study |
Sparks
Replies: 3
Views: 1141
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Forum: Work in Progress Posted: Mon Jun 25, 2001 5:23 pm Subject: Anatomy Study |
Well feeb, that was informative images/smiles/icon_razz.gif
Anyways, I think it looks good, but when it comes down to it I really know very little about anatomy. The abs look... very off, the seco ... |
Topic: Update thread on lighting practice, C&C |
Sparks
Replies: 3
Views: 1162
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Forum: Work in Progress Posted: Mon Jun 25, 2001 4:52 pm Subject: Update thread on lighting practice, C&C |
There's little to no shading in his hair, it's not all uniform in shade. on the back half of his arms it should be darker, and I still thing you're emphasizing the shadow under the collar bone too mu ... |
Topic: My red right hand |
Sparks
Replies: 12
Views: 2582
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Forum: Work in Progress Posted: Mon Jun 25, 2001 4:45 pm Subject: My red right hand |
quote:Originally posted by feebsaint: Sparks! You can see it???!!!! Wow... my bad, I guess... dunno why I can't get through. *shrug*
It was a joke, you know... haha? Anyways, yea I tried copying/pas ... |
Topic: My red right hand |
Sparks
Replies: 12
Views: 2582
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Forum: Work in Progress Posted: Sun Jun 24, 2001 1:30 pm Subject: My red right hand |
Personally, I think the little red X is off center a bit, maybe a pixel to the left would work
Good bevel on the box though, I looks forward to more of your work |
Topic: Update Update Update (insert typing sounds here) 6/24/01 |
Sparks
Replies: 51
Views: 15757
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Forum: Work in Progress Posted: Sun Jun 24, 2001 12:17 am Subject: Update Update Update (insert typing sounds here) 6/24/01 |
hehe, I'd imagine it's VERY hard to find picture of legit camel toes online images/smiles/icon_smile.gif though I'd suggest ditto.com
As for the eyes... now it looks like it isn't the 400th time s ... |
Topic: Campbell GiJoe cover colored. |
Sparks
Replies: 10
Views: 1526
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Sat Jun 23, 2001 8:49 pm Subject: Campbell GiJoe cover colored. |
very nice, I like... wish I could draw like that so I'd have something decent to color! |
Topic: ::fidget:: um, hi... |
Sparks
Replies: 5
Views: 1996
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Forum: Work in Progress Posted: Sat Jun 23, 2001 7:22 pm Subject: ::fidget:: um, hi... |
I like that last one. The curve on the blade isn't the same throughout, and the lensflare :/ but overall it's a very nice painting job. If you wanted to work on it, make the curvature of the blade m ... |
Topic: More monster profile sketches, and one of 'em with some ligh |
Sparks
Replies: 1
Views: 653
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Forum: Work in Progress Posted: Sat Jun 23, 2001 7:19 pm Subject: More monster profile sketches, and one of 'em with some ligh |
for the shading, I really don't understand where the light's coming from. You have his cheekbones and under the neck darker than any other part of his body (which isn't right in itself) meaning that ... |
Topic: Update Update Update (insert typing sounds here) 6/24/01 |
Sparks
Replies: 51
Views: 15757
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Forum: Work in Progress Posted: Sat Jun 23, 2001 7:09 pm Subject: Update Update Update (insert typing sounds here) 6/24/01 |
quote:Originally posted by feebsaint: Sparks, thanks, man.
Yeah, I didn't add a 'crease' in the crotch, for the reason this will be seen by all ages when published, and I have to downplay the whole c ... |
Topic: Update Update Update (insert typing sounds here) 6/24/01 |
Sparks
Replies: 51
Views: 15757
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Forum: Work in Progress Posted: Fri Jun 22, 2001 9:30 pm Subject: Update Update Update (insert typing sounds here) 6/24/01 |
wow, that's really looking good. Only thing I can see is that the crotch of her pants is just sort of a flat rectangle there, it doesn't have any creases or work in with the design of the rest of her ... |
Topic: Owl mortar. |
Sparks
Replies: 35
Views: 10325
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Fri Jun 22, 2001 8:22 pm Subject: Owl mortar. |
OMG!! That is definitely the funniest thing I've seen this week! Great work on the effects and feel of the pic |
Topic: Sumfin I did fer a fwiend |
Sparks
Replies: 2
Views: 899
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Forum: Work in Progress Posted: Fri Jun 22, 2001 2:23 pm Subject: Sumfin I did fer a fwiend |
Not bad, though even though I understand it was a quickie, going over the basic outline in a darker pencil for some sort of line definition on parts like the glasses would be my only suggestion... cau ... |
Topic: More new random W.I.P |
Sparks
Replies: 6
Views: 1515
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Forum: Work in Progress Posted: Fri Jun 22, 2001 1:19 pm Subject: More new random W.I.P |
whoa... what's that first guy got in his pants there? images/smiles/icon_razz.gif jk
I really like the new ironman, very nice colors and it has much more of an edge to it than your older one |
Topic: Game menu needs allot of work.. but what? |
Sparks
Replies: 4
Views: 1732
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Forum: Work in Progress Posted: Thu Jun 21, 2001 9:21 pm Subject: Game menu needs allot of work.. but what? |
looks pretty cool, but I can'r really read what it says in the top right over that circular image. I really just needs smore more texturing and detailing. Also... isn't it multiplayer, not multyplay ... |
Topic: Dark Elf Chick |
Sparks
Replies: 19
Views: 5548
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Forum: Work in Progress Posted: Thu Jun 21, 2001 9:16 pm Subject: Dark Elf Chick |
I really have no idea what elves are supposed to look like, but when I first saw the black and white picture it looked like she would definitely be light skinned, and I think the darker skin justd doe ... |
Topic: Fix the CEO's head |
Sparks
Replies: 19
Views: 6783
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Thu Jun 21, 2001 8:08 pm Subject: Fix the CEO's head |
I used to do a lot of this exact same kinda thing... mostly putting my friends in compromising photos... but anyways, I digress
They way I'd do it, is first get the head back as its own image
Save i ... |
Topic: samurai... improvments made |
Sparks
Replies: 3
Views: 1453
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Forum: Work in Progress Posted: Tue Jun 19, 2001 3:35 pm Subject: samurai... improvments made |
It looks good, and it's a good indicator of where you are now in your drawing abilities. The best way to get better would be to start on some new sketches, because it seems like you've been working w ... |
Topic: img-Transport |
Sparks
Replies: 11
Views: 2966
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Mon Jun 18, 2001 4:51 pm Subject: img-Transport |
That's very nice! I really like the expression on the mech's face... reminds me of the hobbes from Calvin and Hobbes for some odd reason |
Topic: Duo |
Sparks
Replies: 2
Views: 887
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Forum: Work in Progress Posted: Sun Jun 17, 2001 6:38 pm Subject: Duo |
Pretty nice, although the proportions are a little scary. Mostly the arms, they seem too long, and the zombies are is definitely going against the joint there.... maybe have some bone protruding is i ... |
Topic: The Masks We Wear - crits please |
Sparks
Replies: 20
Views: 4019
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Forum: Work in Progress Posted: Sat Jun 16, 2001 9:17 pm Subject: The Masks We Wear - crits please |
Very nice, I especially like the detail work on the feathers! Only thing is that it doesn't look like she's really holding the mask handle... maybe have a couple of fingers pinching it or close the w ... |
Topic: Anatomy learning in progress |
Sparks
Replies: 18
Views: 3905
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Forum: Work in Progress Posted: Sat Jun 16, 2001 9:08 pm Subject: Anatomy learning in progress |
her left half of the head seems to be more rounded and overall larger than the right. Overall it's pretty good, but she reminds me of that woman ogre from shrek images/smiles/icon_razz.gif |
Topic: Roboto |
Sparks
Replies: 5
Views: 1301
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Forum: Work in Progress Posted: Fri Jun 15, 2001 9:44 pm Subject: Roboto |
I like it! Though I can't see the whole thing on my screen at once I like the pose, it matches his facial expression very well |
Topic: my take on a space marine |
Sparks
Replies: 11
Views: 2220
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Forum: Work in Progress Posted: Fri Jun 15, 2001 9:40 pm Subject: my take on a space marine |
I'm not really sure what you're tryign to do with this, but if you're going to transfer your sketches to the computer to be colored
1.) Ink your drawing, so the lines are defined and conserved 2.) Cr ... |
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