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Hi...I made a new website. Third one to the name. And I don't even like making http://www.tim-batiuk.com/africa.jpg
Watercolor, Ink
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http://www.tim-batiuk.com/italiscene.jpg
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Enayla - Thanks alot for taking the time to reply and point everything out. Yeah, I agree with the chins, although I just have so much trouble seeing it. I draw every day but I'm consistent in my mi ...

So I was deciding I should be in the practicing of drawing womens' heads, so here's a page of the practice...I hope it's...alright...so anyway, any overall critiques would be appreciated. Thanks!!

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xmmx- Thanks! Yeah I'm still debating what to put time into, the guy and dog are borderlining being overdone...and I wanted the simplest background that would do...I dunno. As for the expression, we ...

Hey everybody, here's a watercolor I finished earlier today. It was kind of a fast one so I was wondering what I should invest more time in. Thanks a lot.
http://gallery.passion4art.com/members/ti ...

Followed the crits...
http://gallery.passion4art.com/members/timski/clark2.jpg

Thanks!!!

Funk Master Kane- Yeah I agree about the hat, I made the darks too dark and the lights too light...I'll smooth it over some...thanks. images/smiles/icon_smile.gif

pappuftp- Wow thanks, that's rea ...

Hey everyone...well, this is an oil painting that's finished but I'm not happy with it...so any critiques that I can use to better the painting before I have to show it would be great. Thanks alot.
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Uh hi....I didn't see you there. Well, here is a watercolor picture I did for Shane Gline's drawing class thing stuff. Just wondering what the real artists are thinking about it, cause this inexperi ...

Hey everybody, thanks a lot for checking this post out. After learning my lesson with several free website hosting sites, I'm finally going to fork out the dough for a .com website and I'm wondering ...

Well the bandwith for my website was exceeded so I got rid of the link. Sorry for the trouble. Next time, maybe? Thanks.

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Express the form? Sorry, don't get what you mean. If you are completely painting over the lineart then you should be fine, but if you are going to have the lines show in the final product then the l ...

No problems here. Nice and simple, too people are reinventing the wheel and making 56K modems implode with too much stuff. Anyway I like the site map (especially the statue of you), my only suggesti ...

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Joking. You have really great textures down, pretty amazing. Anatomy seems fine to me, it's the guy's head that's bugging me. From the angle that we're looking at (worm's eye view I t ...

Hey, nice website. Well let's see if I can cover the drawings under "Art"-
Ivy ~ head too small, waist too big, nice coloring
Rogue ~ face is distorted, legs too long, sexy and nice coloring again
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Criticism?

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Wow, I really like this picture. Spielen verboten = forbidden play? Cool. The sign looks great, the bunny ears guy looks stylish, the buildings are drama ...

I like it. Not a lot to critique. Lineart is great, I don't see any problems there. The texture of the walls and the water fit in nicely with the cartoon style. My only crit would be more highligh ...

images/smiles/icon_eek.gif Whoa that's cool. Please tell me you didn't do that lineart with the mouse, thats unfreakinbelievable. In the lineart it's really flawless, I'm not sure where she's lookin ...

Hey, me again, Petra. Petra as in the capital of Nabataea? images/smiles/icon_confused.gif Anyway, I like this image. Nice colors, and I really like the two completely different styles put toget ...

Hey, nice style you have there. I really like the painterly style in the first picture. The coloring is awesome and those are some scary fish. I don't want to sound disgusting but I thought that I' ...

The lesbian vampire business is booming right now in this day and age, face it. I like this drawing, you have the photo quality smoothness and tones that I always admire. The face is kinda washed ou ...

Sweet drawing, has a lot of potential.
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I like the colors that you used, and that hair is off to a really cool start. Nice and simple. Great job on the pants too, the folds and stuff look nice. ...

Man I admire you mouse users. (bows) The fur is great, you must have spent forver and a couple hours make all of those nice hairs. I don't like how the hat recedes into the background at the top. ...

Hey, cool colors in the first picture. Personally I would downplay the gun and the gloves, they stand out way too much with the black outline and dark colors. I don't think that the picture is as ef ...

I don't have a lot of experience with Swedish children's game interfaces but I'll try. The art itself is good, the style simplicity suits a children's game. The thing that's bugging me really is the ...

Cool eyes, the facial expression is great. The thing that bugs me the most are the folds in the clothing and the way it 'hangs' on her. Maybe check some references or put on a cute little dress like ...