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plant42
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 Posted: Thu Nov 02, 2000 1:54 pm |
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Hey - I really like this. Of course I always like people posting their first work, it takes a lot of courage to pin up your work next to the likes of Faust and Spooge...
So I like the color, the comic-direction, and the feeling of movement in the hair and grass.
I'd keep working on the figure, the head is good, the arm is a bit thin, and the legs are a tad too long, and a little thin at the knees. Also the clifface could stand a little more detail - some rocks and stuff.
Good stuff.
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sacrelicious
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| Posted: Thu Nov 02, 2000 4:07 pm |
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I like this a lot! You've got a great style going here. I agree with plant 42 on his suggestions. I noticed just one more thing: The water reflects an orange sun just below the horizon, and yet there is no sun above the horizon. And you may want to add purple to the ocean near the bottom of the picture, just to match the sky's shading. But it really looks great, definitely keep going!
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mcr
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| Posted: Thu Nov 02, 2000 7:54 pm |
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| well thank you very much, ill see what i can come up with... |
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proximo
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| Posted: Thu Nov 02, 2000 8:15 pm |
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| I like the concept alot , just a few things i would change to make the pic come to life more .. maybe try to arc the back just a tad more to bring out out pose more .. and just my own opininon but the legs look very long .. i like long legs on a chick just as much as the next guy but for some reason they look really long ehh and if you could maybe brin out the other boob a little .. right now her chest looks very flat almost like flat with a pyramid on it or somthing make some nice boobs that are not pointy eheh .. unless there is a chill on the cliff .. anyhow dont take this to heart.. keep up the good work .. post the final when your done .. |
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mcr
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| Posted: Thu Nov 02, 2000 9:31 pm |
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well, i took your suggestions into consideration , and heres what i got,, thanks for all your help guys. 
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mcr
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| Posted: Fri Nov 03, 2000 12:51 am |
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Well, this is a pic ive been working on for about 4 days, any comments and/or suggestions would be very much appreciated.Thanks for reading.... 
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[This message has been edited by mcr (edited November 02, 2000).] |
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