[Tweeder]

I've been working on this for about 4 days, dont know how many hours total. This is my first full, decent picture with my tablet. It was actually drawn/inked/scanned but the rest is digital, I ended up changing most of the original sketch too.

I did the clouds tonight, saw that coming home today and just had to put it in, some people have said it looks like a meteor or something shooting down and it makes the image seem sarcastic, fine day + meteor .. but it's just meant to be cool lookin clouds.

Let me know what you think, please



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[jHof]

The back part of your hair mass is to much of a different color I think. Unless there is something casting a shadow on that part for some reason.

Now I'm not sure if you wana do anima/manga or cartoony or realistic proportion stuff. You'd have to clue us in on what type of style your going for before we could prolly pick at it more. I feel though whatever style your gona go with, your arms are abit to long. Generally the tips of your fingers will reach about mid-thigh when your arms are at your sides.

I'd suggest a hill or a tree in the distanc to help give some more feeling of space in the picture.

Hope that helps some, snap to it!