[ForgottenDavey]

Fisrt off gotta say thanks to Solitaire for this one. He posted some line art a couple weeks ago and here's what I did with it.

Also if anyone comes up with a good idea about what else I could put in the background I would love to hear about it. I'm kinda dry on ideas right now. Once again, thanks Solitaire.

[EviLToYLeT]

That's pretty nice! But the thing is I'm not really sure on what kind of style your going for. If your going for the more realistic, make sure that you blend in the darks and highlights more. And if your going for the anime type look just make the shadows/lights/very well defined as to the point you can definitely tell the edges. As for background, that's totally up to you to decide what kind of mood you want to convey. But since the girl looks kind of relaxed and looks like she's posing.maybe a water background(lake, waterfall, etc.) would be appropriate. The current background that you have right now is nice, but the night scene doesn't match the lighting on the girl. Hope I haven't confused ya, and hope it helps!

[ForgottenDavey]

Thanks EviLToYLeT,
I definitaly agree with you on the background thing. Like I said just a little dry on ideas right now. And thanks for all the suggestions, I will take them into account when I get around to reworking it.

[Solitaire]

huh, only have plenty o'time, so forgive me if I comment later....

It seems she attracted you , well thanx .
As always my colored version is still in the works (...busy,busy,busy )

OK crit follows...

c ya later