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Topic : "Final Version? Original + Compilation | NEED HELP!!" |
TweeK member
Member # Joined: 21 Nov 1999 Posts: 136 Location: The Netherlands
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Posted: Mon Dec 18, 2000 2:33 pm |
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Hey guys!
Maybe you seen the post a while ago.
Finished it... I think, maybe you got some comments.
Here's the original
And here the compilation
Time I did about it.... way too long
Anywayz, what do you think about them?
Greetz
Jeff |
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Tinusch member
Member # Joined: 25 Dec 1999 Posts: 2757 Location: Rhode Island, USA
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Posted: Mon Dec 18, 2000 3:44 pm |
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Did they ask you to do it, or are you just a big fan? |
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bld member
Member # Joined: 15 Dec 2000 Posts: 235 Location: USA
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Posted: Mon Dec 18, 2000 3:45 pm |
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I love the face, the upper body, and the arms. Very realistic, even the nipples are done well (although they look too tan to me). Although from the belly down it looses its luster a bit, it looks like you rushed the tail, and like others said before, I think the tail should be longer. Adding individual scales would make the tail alot more detailed. But all in all, I like the pic.
Would this pic happen to be for a website of the up and coming porn queen Devon? |
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TweeK member
Member # Joined: 21 Nov 1999 Posts: 136 Location: The Netherlands
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Posted: Mon Dec 18, 2000 3:55 pm |
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hehe, some mate likes to post porn on my ftp just showing off his T1 line.
One day I found a nice pic off her, so I started drawing.
Later he came to me and said there was this pixelcontest. Prize? a porn movie and a signed picture. He said he'd pay me 100 bucks if I'd win the shit for him
so here I am
but you guys seem to know a lot about porn
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FrostBite junior member
Member # Joined: 15 Dec 2000 Posts: 41 Location: Santa Cruz, CA, USA
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Posted: Mon Dec 18, 2000 4:11 pm |
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I like it from the waist up, two things I noticed though bld already pointed out the tail needing some more work. The hair could probably be a little longer. Usually when I think of mermaids the hair length is either close to the middle of the back or just above the butt. I like how the closeup of her face looks in the compilation pic.
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Lukias Guest
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Posted: Mon Dec 18, 2000 4:58 pm |
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Very cool, I agree with the above comments
The breasts look like they're being pushed against glass.....if ya get my drift.
The enlarged face looks amazing, Its some nice work!. |
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Kjetil Nystuen member
Member # Joined: 19 Jun 2000 Posts: 197 Location: Norway
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Posted: Mon Dec 18, 2000 5:15 pm |
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Hi TweeK,
you have some really nice pixeling going on here. I have a question for you. You are doing a metamorphosis of a babe and a fish. Why don't you try to morph the skin and the.. uhh.. fish skin? You have already been morphing the body's together. If you feel that the blue and the skin tones don't mix very well, try some dolphinish grey, perhaps that work? Also, from the pose she seems to be swimming in water. You could make a good background out Aqua colors, with light rays from above. (This is starting to sound like a Boris Vallejo painting) These are just some thoughts, though. Beautiful face, I like it alot. The compilation is looking good. I can't determine if I'm looking on water or skies - but maybe that's what you are trying to achieve?
I really hope you win that signed porn movie, I cross my fingers for you!!
-Kjetil |
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Zeno junior member
Member # Joined: 14 Dec 2000 Posts: 28 Location: St Aug. , FL US
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Posted: Mon Dec 18, 2000 5:21 pm |
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Great facial close-up, it looks very realistic. I think adding some detail to the lower half of her body would give better unity throughout the picture. Some shimmering scales perhaps? Keep up the good work! |
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TweeK member
Member # Joined: 21 Nov 1999 Posts: 136 Location: The Netherlands
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Posted: Mon Dec 18, 2000 5:24 pm |
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hmm yess... i'm not to good at drawing gils and stuff maybe you got some tips?
I did the clouds and water on purpose, I wanted to create a dreamworld (were you only dream about gorgeous girls )
I'll try with the lightrays, sounds cool
greetz
Jeff |
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