[balistic]

You can tell Brian needs a date when . . .

Click here to look at the first draft


I've only put about an hour into this so far. I'm not using reference, so if you spot any problems with anatomy, let me know. I didn't realize how, erm, "endowed" I'd made her until just now . . . will probably tone those down a bit

Inspiration came from the title of a Stacey Pullen song.

Comments are greatly appreciated!

[ August 08, 2001: Message edited by: balistic ]

[balistic]

*bump* because my server seems to be alive again.

[Pat]

I love your colors and the looseness of your strokes. I'm really wanting to see some of those paintings you're doing for your job you can't post.

I made a few adjustments, which may or may not be a good idea. For one, it struck me that her arms might be a little stumpy given the length of her nice legs. People can and do have arms that short, but I thought she might look more sexy with longer ones.



-Pat

[ August 03, 2001: Message edited by: Pat ]

[balistic]

You're right about the arm Pat . . . I'll need to either lengthen it (as you've shown), or maybe try and sell the foreshortening more.

Much thanks!

[balistic]

Spent a couple more hours on it today, still need to address some issues in the abdomen and pelvis, and do something with the background.



There was this old Italian guy in one of my figure drawing classes who always had the same critique for my studies:

"Make-ah her boobs-ah little-ah biggah."

Man, did that advice ever stick

Feedback is still mucho appreciado.

[gLitterbug]

I like it, especially the hair and the gem(?) in it.

But the best thing of all is the fuzzy sofa.

[oneiros]

thats really coming together, i love hows its coming out.
the shape of her left breast is bugging me a bit, seems a bit -off- but its getting late, im tired, and the voices in my head are a bit loud at the moment, so I might be wrong ;P

[balistic]

Fixed her belly and pelvis. Ignore those ghastly pant legs, I've decided to try something different there as soon as I get another chance to paint.



Thanks for the input guys!

[Svanur]

Really cool pic and good colors, the only thing I find a bit strange is her upper part. What age are intending her to be? She seems to me to be about 13-14 years old.

edit: She ain't so freakish

[ August 09, 2001: Message edited by: Svanur ]

[balistic]

Thanks for the feedback Svanur. Proportionally, I think she's in line with the 19-22 age range I'm shooting for, but she does have youthful features . . . I may add some lipstick and eyeshadow to make her look less kid-like.

[nobile]

I personally think thather breasts are a bit fallen, it's fine if she has 'em big, but it looks kinda grost if they're fallen.