[Anthony J]

inspired by the tool song "third eye"
also researched alot about meditation and spiritual essence in order to get this started. I'm totally loving the composition
but its just begun, so i gotta work on it...

you want to let me know something if it seems wrong go ahead.
Of course its just started, so i realize that the black hole in the top of his head would be the first problem...i should do something cool with the lighting. his hands have just begun the process of coming out.

thats my self crit, what do you think?

alrighty, post later, its holiday time from school *so the next 3 weeks ill be away, won't be posting any work, cause I won't have my wacom prolly* then again maybe i could bring it with me ? if only I had a metal suitcase with handcuffs...there's no way i'm letting it out of my sight !! mruhahahaha

need sleep
later

[Indian_Prophet]

well I think you should keep the shoulders the way they are so in you don't get into a flat picture bind. It appearrs the left arm is slightly more towards the front so that would shove the shoulder towards the fron to allowing just a little more light to hit it depending on the main direction of light. You could bring the forearm and hand forward just a tad but not really necessary. Over-all this picture is very good. It looks like it belongs on a Creed CD cover.
Peace

[ December 14, 2001: Message edited by: Indian_Prophet ]

[Novacaptain]

Looks like it'll be quite a piece of work when you're done with it. The eyes seem like they could need some work to make them look more alike. I'd change the expression to something more dramatical, something less placid. The shading is obviously not done but the arms should probably not be so dark.

What is he emerging from? The third eye of another? The shoulders don't look the same size. I suggest going for the less muscular one.

More hair...and maybe the beam of darkness could be a beam of light.

Good work, I hope my comments were of any use.