[ValarianROOT]

Hello again. Let me know what you think of this and/or if you have any suggestions. Thanks.



JN

[Agrajag]

I like the image. It reminds me of classic science fiction movies. And the guy has a cool look on his face, somewhere between malicious and determined.
I'm a puny beginner myself, so this is only an opinion rather than advice:
I feel there's too little contrast in the picture, value-wise. Your shadows are defined enough to indicate a pretty direct lightsource, but the tonal values throughout the scene are rather close together.
And I may be wrong, because you may have intended the area to be in shadow, but I think his right leg would throw a shadow on the chair.
Again: cool piece!

[ValarianROOT]

Thanks, those are some great points. I'll keep 'em in mind. The only excuse for the low contrast is that i'm trying to work from dark to light and have only gotten about halfway to light with most of it. Thanks again.

[Othman]

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This picture is coming on fairly well, though I have noticed a perspective mistake. Its on the arms of the chair, as the left arm of the chair looks as if it being looked at straight on and the right arm of the chair looks as if its being looked at from above. I think the they should both look fairly similar to each other from this view. You may already be aware, though I though I might point it out.