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Magicman member
Member # Joined: 26 Jan 2001 Posts: 146 Location: Germany
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Posted: Sun Feb 04, 2001 3:23 am |
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Hi,
can you see how is that? ...hope you can, if not my portrait is not so good.
Your Sincerely Magicman |
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macho2k member
Member # Joined: 20 Oct 2000 Posts: 121 Location: V�xj�, Sweden
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Posted: Sun Feb 04, 2001 3:48 am |
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Quentin Quarantino (eh, whatever!)
good
//micke |
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e:mp junior member
Member # Joined: 20 Nov 2000 Posts: 17 Location: Hamburg,Germany
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Posted: Sun Feb 04, 2001 3:53 am |
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Michael Schumacher???
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Magicman member
Member # Joined: 26 Jan 2001 Posts: 146 Location: Germany
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Posted: Sun Feb 04, 2001 4:33 am |
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Hi,
yes...you got it. it�s quentin tarantino.
he is looking like micheal schumacher, really? ...perhaps that chin!
Your Sincerely Magicman |
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SplitSoul member
Member # Joined: 04 Nov 2000 Posts: 336 Location: Denmark
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Posted: Sun Feb 04, 2001 5:43 am |
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Quite good.
I know next to nothing about drawing, but I can tell you that the chin should be a little less wide. Simply because I'm a big fan of Tarantino.
-Split |
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Mime member
Member # Joined: 02 Oct 2000 Posts: 224 Location: France
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Posted: Sun Feb 04, 2001 7:19 am |
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yes its look like Quentin
nice job  |
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Magicman member
Member # Joined: 26 Jan 2001 Posts: 146 Location: Germany
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Posted: Mon Feb 05, 2001 8:06 am |
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Hi,
is this better as the burn/dodge method which I used before?
Bye Magicman |
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Togusa junior member
Member # Joined: 03 Apr 2000 Posts: 45 Location: Vienna, Austria
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Posted: Mon Feb 05, 2001 8:23 am |
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Hi!
I thought of Tarantino at first too ;-) I would have done the picture with more contrast (clothes => the face drops a quite dark shadow on his neck, but his shirt doesn't on the coat to give you an example)
but hey, i could never do it as good as you did, so just take it as an inspiration and not critique ;-)
cu
togusa
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Magicman member
Member # Joined: 26 Jan 2001 Posts: 146 Location: Germany
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Posted: Tue Feb 06, 2001 2:19 pm |
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Hi,
i should paint an other background? I have that color so soft chosen so that it good combined. i think so...
Bye Magicman |
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Jezebel member
Member # Joined: 02 Nov 2000 Posts: 1940 Location: Mesquite, TX, US
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Posted: Tue Feb 06, 2001 2:32 pm |
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Good job Magicman, nice to see you posting some work recently.
One thing I think is a little weird is the pinky finger on his left (our right) hand. It looks sort deformed, hehe.
You could use some more contrast on the face as well. Maybe some more shadow under the nose and on the lips.
-Beth
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Posted: Tue Feb 06, 2001 4:17 pm |
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Hahaha! He looks like a drug lord! Nice work.
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Akolyte member
Member # Joined: 12 Sep 2000 Posts: 722 Location: NY/RSAD
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Posted: Tue Feb 06, 2001 5:53 pm |
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Leisure Suit Larry 14: "Used Car Lot Larry" |
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Magicman member
Member # Joined: 26 Jan 2001 Posts: 146 Location: Germany
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Posted: Fri Mar 02, 2001 6:44 pm |
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Hi,
i�ve edit the eyes, the eyebrows and the hand.
it�s better now? i hope ...
Bye Magicman |
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Lomi member
Member # Joined: 05 Feb 2001 Posts: 261 Location: Sechelt, BC, Canada
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Posted: Sat Mar 03, 2001 12:11 am |
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pretty good, although his face could use a little more definition between his eyes and his eyebrows could use some more detail and maybe make the lips sharper, the hands are fantastic though, not many people can do hands well  |
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Magicman member
Member # Joined: 26 Jan 2001 Posts: 146 Location: Germany
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Posted: Sat Mar 03, 2001 3:45 am |
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Hi,
are that eyes better now?
Bye Magicman |
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Lomi member
Member # Joined: 05 Feb 2001 Posts: 261 Location: Sechelt, BC, Canada
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Posted: Sat Mar 03, 2001 10:42 pm |
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definately  |
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