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Magicman
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PostPosted: Sun Feb 04, 2001 3:23 am     Reply with quote
Hi,

can you see how is that? ...hope you can, if not my portrait is not so good.



Your Sincerely Magicman
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PostPosted: Sun Feb 04, 2001 3:48 am     Reply with quote
Quentin Quarantino (eh, whatever!)

good

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e:mp
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PostPosted: Sun Feb 04, 2001 3:53 am     Reply with quote
Michael Schumacher???

8-)
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Magicman
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PostPosted: Sun Feb 04, 2001 4:33 am     Reply with quote
Hi,

yes...you got it. it�s quentin tarantino.

he is looking like micheal schumacher, really? ...perhaps that chin!

Your Sincerely Magicman
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SplitSoul
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PostPosted: Sun Feb 04, 2001 5:43 am     Reply with quote
Quite good.

I know next to nothing about drawing, but I can tell you that the chin should be a little less wide. Simply because I'm a big fan of Tarantino.

-Split
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Mime
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PostPosted: Sun Feb 04, 2001 7:19 am     Reply with quote
yes its look like Quentin
nice job
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Magicman
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PostPosted: Mon Feb 05, 2001 8:06 am     Reply with quote
Hi,

is this better as the burn/dodge method which I used before?

Bye Magicman
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Togusa
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PostPosted: Mon Feb 05, 2001 8:23 am     Reply with quote
Hi!
I thought of Tarantino at first too ;-) I would have done the picture with more contrast (clothes => the face drops a quite dark shadow on his neck, but his shirt doesn't on the coat to give you an example)
but hey, i could never do it as good as you did, so just take it as an inspiration and not critique ;-)

cu
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Magicman
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 06, 2001 2:19 pm     Reply with quote
Hi,

i should paint an other background? I have that color so soft chosen so that it good combined. i think so...

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PostPosted: Tue Feb 06, 2001 2:32 pm     Reply with quote
Good job Magicman, nice to see you posting some work recently.

One thing I think is a little weird is the pinky finger on his left (our right) hand. It looks sort deformed, hehe.

You could use some more contrast on the face as well. Maybe some more shadow under the nose and on the lips.



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PostPosted: Tue Feb 06, 2001 4:17 pm     Reply with quote
Hahaha! He looks like a drug lord! Nice work.

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PostPosted: Tue Feb 06, 2001 5:53 pm     Reply with quote
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Magicman
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PostPosted: Fri Mar 02, 2001 6:44 pm     Reply with quote
Hi,

i�ve edit the eyes, the eyebrows and the hand.

it�s better now? i hope ...



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Lomi
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PostPosted: Sat Mar 03, 2001 12:11 am     Reply with quote
pretty good, although his face could use a little more definition between his eyes and his eyebrows could use some more detail and maybe make the lips sharper, the hands are fantastic though, not many people can do hands well
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Magicman
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PostPosted: Sat Mar 03, 2001 3:45 am     Reply with quote
Hi,

are that eyes better now?



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PostPosted: Sat Mar 03, 2001 10:42 pm     Reply with quote
definately
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