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kaylon
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PostPosted: Wed May 09, 2001 12:29 am     Reply with quote
Im not to great at females...but I'm trying

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Collosimo
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PostPosted: Wed May 09, 2001 1:00 am     Reply with quote
Nice. I like the copper green background. The bronze / copper armour stuff is a ood idea and pretty well rendered. There is something strange about the chest... I cant pick it yet... maybe someone else will. The eyes are the wrong shape.. the seem as f you sort of just drew what you 'thought' eyes looked like. Not what they 'do' look like. Look in the mirror, or someone else.. preferably female...
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Awetopsy
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PostPosted: Wed May 09, 2001 8:50 am     Reply with quote
ooooh.. a left handed archer... thats cool.. I actually like this pic quite a bit.. only critique I have is that it doesnt seem contrasty enough..... but Its nicely done.. Im not really in the mood to look for anatomy things right now.. :P
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Bombesei
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PostPosted: Wed May 09, 2001 12:44 pm     Reply with quote
i think i might know what collosimo is talking about with the chest. the breast on the right, which would be the girl's left breast, should be a little higher, and the other one should be a little lower. maybe. otherwise, very cool.
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Francis
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PostPosted: Wed May 09, 2001 11:10 pm     Reply with quote
I like this a lot - like the color scheme and the rendering of the materials.
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kaylon
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PostPosted: Thu May 10, 2001 4:55 am     Reply with quote
Thanks for all the Crits...very usefull...

Oh and she's right handed...with archery if your right handed you hold the bow in your left hand and draw the string to aim with your right.. .
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TheMilkMan
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PostPosted: Thu May 10, 2001 6:32 am     Reply with quote
Looking good kaylon...your deffinatly getting there!
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