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green.7 · Posted: Fri Jul 20, 2001 7:44 am

new painting

Jezebel · Posted: Fri Jul 20, 2001 7:54 am

I think you did a really beautiful job on her hair, the background and the thin little chains holding up her bra-thing. Those chains are great

However, I don't think she looks all that furious... and she doesn't quite seem to be looking at the monster, he seems too far behind her for her to see him.

Her face looks really nice, just not furious... or even slightly perturbed ^_^

I think the image would be improved a lot if you work on the folds/wrinkles in her skirt, add a little more contrast to it, things like that. It's sort of draws my eye because it's so red, but then it doesn't look as developed as the rest of the piece.

Overall it's looking really good... especially those little straps

Beth

[ July 20, 2001: Message edited by: Jezebel ]

Awetopsy · Posted: Fri Jul 20, 2001 9:39 am

hey, I like your pic so far.. I have one issue tho.. she looks as though she's gonna fall over backwards.. she has no weight distribution on her rear leg and her foot seems as though its gonna wedge between the rocks into the shadows.

i did a small repaint for you to show what I mean...

if her body is leaning that far back she needs to counter that weight by putting her leg back a little farther.

hope this helps on top of what Jezebel said.

other than that its a really good pic.

Gordillo · Posted: Fri Jul 20, 2001 10:16 am

Nice pic,very well executed, but

...her face looks like she�s falling in love with the monster.

Chris Holden · junior member Member # Joined: 11 Jun 2001 Posts: 9

Awesome image, but I'm confused by the giant monster looking at me. Also, it has all these detailed clothes, armor, and jewelery, yet it's weapon of choice is a board with a nail through it? It should have a weapon built in the same style as it's armor.

Dryfire · Posted: Fri Jul 20, 2001 10:40 am

reminds me of the fine tale "Lady or the tiger"

green.7 · Posted: Fri Jul 20, 2001 3:35 pm

To Gordillo.

Yep, I and my friends have same version,but about monster fall in love

MoleculeMan · Posted: Fri Jul 20, 2001 3:58 pm

SHe doesnt look to angry!

green.7 · Posted: Sat Jul 21, 2001 1:02 pm

Who can tell some about a composition?

Freddio · Posted: Sun Jul 22, 2001 7:22 am

wow thats fantastic green I like it alot..

well there is so much you can say about compisition.

Yours isnt too bad..

I think the girl should maby come towards the left.

doh I gotta go..

I'll finish this up latr