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dr . bang
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 18, 2001 11:31 am     Reply with quote
A after finishing half of the castle, I realize that it needed a lightsource and a sky light would be too complex so i made an explosion.

C&C are appreciated, thanks

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PostPosted: Sun Nov 18, 2001 11:41 am     Reply with quote
wow, that is really cool. Love the explosion effect

It would be cool to get some action in the picture maybe a spaceship blasted the top or something.....

and maybe a better star/space background

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[ November 18, 2001: Message edited by: jayceeL ]
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S4Sb
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Location: near Hamburg (Germany) | Registered: Mar 2000

PostPosted: Sun Nov 18, 2001 11:44 am     Reply with quote
You improve fast as hell, man! Lumental shows its effect I love it
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 18, 2001 1:51 pm     Reply with quote
Holy CWAP ! That's freaky... Makes me want to turn and run (but for a good reason). It really does look like a titanic explosion there.. Nuclear ?
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 18, 2001 2:50 pm     Reply with quote
Shit Dr. Bang, I'm with everyone else. You *DO* improve fast. Your hard work has definitely paid off. Incredible. I'm with Dixter in that I think there should be more contrast - darker shadows, brighter highlights. A bit of texture overlay on the panels might add some interesting pockets of value.

Great work!
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Highfive
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 18, 2001 7:12 pm     Reply with quote
That looks awesome! The building looks really good by itself but you were right to put an explosion in there. It did need something a little extra.

I don't know what was in the tower when it exploded, but I think the flames should be more irregular in shape, rather than spherical. Pieces of debris spinning off the tower trailing smoke might add to the pic as well.
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PostPosted: Mon Nov 19, 2001 12:24 am     Reply with quote
holy shiztat you DO get good fast. I remember the "spooge" portrait drawings way back when. You have come a long way. GJ

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DiXter
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PostPosted: Mon Nov 19, 2001 12:47 am     Reply with quote
Looks really good!!
In my opinion it could need a bit more contrast and some more colour values.. but It still kicks ass.
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