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Jolyon
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Hi everyone,
I had this in work in progress, and have now finished it. After dealing with two different companies with totally different opinions ... I have finally come up with this! I have torn this apart and put it back together more times than I would like to count, been forced to do things I didnt want to do and have had a shitty time of it really. This will have to do... so what do you think? If you saw my previous one and then this which do u reckon is better? I could always post the other as well if you�d like. Thanks ... keep yer hoops froody...
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QwertY
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| Posted: Wed Feb 20, 2002 5:57 am |
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| I think you have done a terrifice job .. the chainges did make it better in my opinion. and now send it out for print and anjoy your work its finisched and its good ! |
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toast!
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| Posted: Wed Feb 20, 2002 5:59 am |
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Welcome to the world of graphic design 
keep the first one in your portfolio; sure it was 2 times better .. |
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ceenda
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| Posted: Wed Feb 20, 2002 6:08 am |
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I think it's great. Nice and clean design.
I think clients are generally a bit annoying, and it's true of any area (especially technology & finance).
Like toast! says, keep the good one for your portfolio. |
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Jolyon
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| Posted: Wed Feb 20, 2002 8:08 am |
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Cheers everyone ... I admit I do prefer the first one. I like the new post office logo old one was pants I put my foot down and they accepted the new one ... thank god. I�m going to go and cry in a corner for a while, and then murder each one of my difficult clients ever so slooooowly...  the fun we have. I have some nice projects on the go at the moment, so as soon as I get it done I�ll post it up here. Thanks again !!  |
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strata
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| Posted: Wed Feb 20, 2002 8:15 am |
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I can't remember the first one well enough to remember what was different about it... but I think you changed the sky and the images in the circles?
And reduced the amount of images in the circles?
I can't really compare them as said... all I can say is that you should be equally proud of this one as of the last one. Having one person with an opinion is bad enough... two is suicide, but you did great anyways! Excellent work joylon, be proud of yourself. |
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Jolyon
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| Posted: Thu Feb 21, 2002 1:39 am |
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| Strata... You should consider going on TV motivating people hehe Thanks for the praise, I am quite happy with it, but you can always be better, on the other hand if I went through life like that I�d never be happy ... I�ll be putting some more stuff up in a big dump.. sound sick eh? Within the next few days so anybody that likes my stuff come and have a peek |
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