Sijun Forums :: View topic - Out doors picture I made mainly for practice

gArGOyLe^ · Posted: Sat Apr 13, 2002 5:57 pm

Tell me what you think.

btw I did this for eatpoo.com forums weekly activity.

http://freestockphotos.com/IMAGES%203/Rockies.jpg <-- thats the reference pic I used.

[ April 13, 2002: Message edited by: gArGOyLe^ ]

Kaete · Posted: Sat Apr 13, 2002 6:24 pm

Hee hee. First thought in my head: "And this is the way we make happy trees!"

gArGOyLe^ · Posted: Sat Apr 13, 2002 6:32 pm

hehehe.. yep

bob told me to put in that happy little path too..

EviLToYLeT · Posted: Sun Apr 14, 2002 9:19 am

I like the directional strokes... however, you may need to refine and add detail to a few parts. Right now, it looks like it went through a motion blur filter.

Novacaptain · Posted: Sun Apr 14, 2002 3:27 pm

nice, i like the mountains.

happy-looking path you have there. It looks like it was made by an enormous iron sphere, rolling through the countryside. Because of it's width and apparent U shape.

The little black spots along the edges of the mountains kinda upset the illusion here...try cleaning that up.

try put some greener tones with the yellow so that the pine trees don't look too out of place.

keep it up

gArGOyLe^ · Posted: Mon Apr 15, 2002 6:10 am

hahaha.. ur right.. it does look like as if a big iron rolled down the hill.. hehe.. attack of the giant iron balls or something

thanks for pointing that out

hmm.. I didnt notice the black lines.. maybe I was looking at the picture too long.. thanks for pointing that out too.. I'll fix that tonite :d

I'm improving.. woohoo.. i'm really improving