Sijun Forums Forum Index
Log in to check your private messages
My Profile Search Who's Online Member List FAQ Register Login Sijun Forums Forum Index

This forum is locked: you cannot post, reply to, or edit topics.   This topic is locked: you cannot edit posts or make replies.
   Sijun Forums Forum Index >> Gallery/Finished Work
View previous topic :: View next topic  
Author   Topic : "Buschmann"
GeN
member


Member #
Joined: 08 Jul 2000
Posts: 137
Location: Germany

PostPosted: Wed May 22, 2002 1:23 am     Reply with quote

Quick portrait... tried to keep it simple, photo ref used.
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail Visit poster's website
Ian Jones
member


Member #
Joined: 01 Oct 2001
Posts: 1114
Location: Brisbane, QLD, Australia.

PostPosted: Fri May 24, 2002 4:52 am     Reply with quote
*bump* this deserves some more replies...

I like the 'structural' quality of the rendering, you really nailed some of those shapes. The facial expression defintely benefits from this, the eyes are great.

I'm not so sure about the beard though, it took me a while to figure out what it was. It also makes the head look detached, along with the 'noodling' around that area. Hope you don't me saying that.

The red on the nose, is that facepaint? or just colouring, if so it seems to stand out too much imo.

You really got a great expression on his face. Good work.
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Visit poster's website
firefreak
member


Member #
Joined: 23 Apr 2001
Posts: 53
Location: hamburg / germany

PostPosted: Fri May 24, 2002 1:51 pm     Reply with quote
like i said sometime ago: you're improving very quickly. nice expression, especially his eyes are well done.
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail Visit poster's website
Display posts from previous:   
This forum is locked: you cannot post, reply to, or edit topics.   This topic is locked: you cannot edit posts or make replies.    Sijun Forums Forum Index -> Gallery/Finished Work All times are GMT - 8 Hours
Page 1 of 1

 
Jump to:  
You cannot post new topics in this forum
You cannot reply to topics in this forum
You cannot edit your posts in this forum
You cannot delete your posts in this forum
You cannot vote in polls in this forum




Powered by phpBB © 2005 phpBB Group