[Max E. Tormer]

This was my first digital serious work see it and tell me your opinion, i like construtive hard critics so don�t be afraid to say your honest opinion, i like learnig and i will in time and with effort, that is all i hope some good feedback here mmmmmm well that is all here is my picture.

[Max E. Tormer]

http://www.deviantart.com/view/675755

[Max E. Tormer]

tecnique:

i did not have a scanner so i
drawed the painting all with my mouse.

[Basement bound]

The red X strikes again.

[Arc][Pello]

lol and all the while hes talking about his techniques

[Max E. Tormer]

So... no one can see it? in my cpu the red x is not maked it�s apereance,

did some one was able to see it or not?, here is an url to the picture any way





my picture

[xmmx]

The pic looks nice there are a few anatomy issues you try to work out mainly with the neck and chest.
I like the overall idea but it could use some more refining also the background could use some spicing up

[Max E. Tormer]

mm thanks for the critics i will look into it , i try to fix it and then, upload it with the changes, thanks for the constructive comments see ya