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Topic : "I need your opinions on my pic of Ryu" |
jasonN member
Member # Joined: 12 Jan 2000 Posts: 842 Location: Sydney Australia
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Posted: Wed Nov 13, 2002 4:07 pm |
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This is what I am working on at the moment. I want the image to be dramatic and full of energy so I decided to exaggerate his arms and use bright colours. But I'm not really sure if it is working or not. What would you change? Should I tone down the arms? Please post your opinions as it will help me push this piece as far as I can. _________________ www.jasonink.net/journal |
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Matthew member
Member # Joined: 05 Oct 2002 Posts: 3784 Location: I am out of here for good
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Posted: Wed Nov 13, 2002 4:39 pm |
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I think this one looks really cool, it would be cool if he wore some big gloves in iron or something. I think that would add some eletrical feeling to the blue ball.
By the way I checked out your site and the stuff in there rocks.
I am also a big fan to The Ataris, What do you think of Bodyjar?, They rock I think...hehe
take it easy
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tilokani member
Member # Joined: 03 Sep 2002 Posts: 254 Location: Toronto
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Posted: Wed Nov 13, 2002 5:34 pm |
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The head's sorta small for the body, it looks pretty cool but you could consider changing it, but then again, you're going for an exaggerated look. Veins, lots of popping veins in the arms would be classic, also the red belt should be added, cause it's Ryu, the belt IS needed. By toning down the arms, you mean making them proportioned, I peronsally advise against it, because the long arms make him look like he's using a lot of power. The Hadou Ken fire ball looks kinda odd, but other than that i like, i like it alot. Oh, also, the facial expression. two thumbs in the air. _________________ girls like shining |
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DarkVVulf member
Member # Joined: 27 Nov 1999 Posts: 201 Location: CO
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Posted: Thu Nov 14, 2002 11:41 am |
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Reminds me of something from the SF Zero 2 movie.
More detail into his fingers of course-
I would suggest making them very detailed and rigged, having the joints and veins noticeable. So it looks like he's really stressing his hands in a sense of rage and power. _________________ den.vvulf |
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jasonN member
Member # Joined: 12 Jan 2000 Posts: 842 Location: Sydney Australia
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Posted: Fri Nov 15, 2002 4:11 pm |
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Matthew: Thanks for the advice I was thinking about putting on his trademark red fighting gloves, but then it looked kinda cumbersome. Thanks for the site feedback The Ataris rock, Bodyjar are great aswell, but I still like the Ataris better.
tilokani: Thanks I will definetely add more veins once I get the initial rendering down. Are you sure Ryu has a red belt? If he's so good at karate, wouldn't he be a black belt? Yes you're right about the arm size showing his use of immense power and I agree with you so I have left them large and bulky. The hadoken will be reworked for the final, I just placed the initial one in to give a sense of lighting and direction. Thanks for your help
DarkVVulf: I actually have the SF Alpha (I don't know if it's the same as SF Zero) movie on DVD and thought some of the concepts such as the "dark hadou" were awesome, so it served as a great source of inspiration. I still have to work the detail into the hands. I think I'll need reference for that, but I'll definetely have all the veins and muscles popping out. Thanks for the help
Well here is the progress. I still need to work on the arms and hadoken ball. I also plan on putting in more veins. There is a vein on his neck, to give an idea of what they will look like. NOw I need to find some reference for realistic placement. Any more input would be appreciated
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tilokani member
Member # Joined: 03 Sep 2002 Posts: 254 Location: Toronto
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Posted: Fri Nov 15, 2002 7:00 pm |
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OOOOOOOOH SHIT! That's just a load of first class! _________________ girls like shining |
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n8 member
Member # Joined: 12 Jan 2000 Posts: 791 Location: Sydney, NSW, Australia
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Posted: Fri Nov 15, 2002 7:16 pm |
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hey jason...your stuffs getting better and better...a couple of suggestions on making it more dramatic...give him glowy eyes ...glowy eyes are always cool..hehehehe...could add some streams of blue electricity running down his fore arms...and possibly throw him in a dark room...you know like how you shine a torch from under your face and it looks all dramatic n spooky n stuffs..hehe...anyway..keep up the good work  _________________ its the simple things that make a great artwork
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gigatron member
Member # Joined: 27 Jun 2002 Posts: 347 Location: Canada
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Posted: Fri Nov 15, 2002 7:20 pm |
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That is great! Ryu is one of my fav game characters. Hmm if he has gone dark hadou like how about making his eyes glow white or red. I think that would make it even more mean  _________________ Open your eyes... and see the world as it really is... |
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DarkVVulf member
Member # Joined: 27 Nov 1999 Posts: 201 Location: CO
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Posted: Fri Nov 15, 2002 11:19 pm |
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Looking forward to seeing this finished. _________________ den.vvulf |
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