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xmmx
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 Posted: Sat Jan 18, 2003 1:45 pm |
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just a little something i am doing for the fun of it 
any it's still got some time before it's finshed
C&C always welcome
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Al Ian
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| Posted: Sat Jan 18, 2003 3:15 pm |
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LOL, very cute!
Only C&C I can give, is most monkies tale's are the same width the whole length of the tail. Kind of like a tube thats rounded on the end.
Love the expression by the way.
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eyalyab
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| Posted: Sat Jan 18, 2003 5:07 pm |
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cool man!
some things maybe:
-the image looks still. i think you should add motion elements: the rocket tails should pierce the air, so make like straight white lines behind the tails, i think the birds look the most still- blur the scared one's wings alittle, as if they were in motion..
-lighting: maybe we should see some of that whicked fire lights on the monkey's ass and tail ;] and on the birds too.
-besides that, i think it'd be cool if the rocket trail came from behind the mountains.
cool stuff man. this rocks. |
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eyalyab
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| Posted: Sat Jan 18, 2003 5:11 pm |
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oh, i just thought one more thing would be super cool to add.
another pigeon stuck on the head of the rocket... (hehe..) as if the rocket hit her smack in the face hehe. it should be smeared on the rocket head facing it and hugging in with its wings (not out of will.. ;] )
anyway, bye for now.. |
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