[Tronbot]

Hi there Sijun users,

this is my first post here, I was already watching quite a while but hadnt posted anything yet. I'm a sixteen years old boy from Germany who loves everything about painting .


I hope we will have a nice time together!

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The Painting

It's a Just-for-Fun painting for the "downtime" project, a cg-film I'm working on with some online friends. 100% Photoshop (except the 2 sketches, both done with pencil on paper).

I think it's almost finished, just some more details and refinement, but I'm currently stuck a bit what to do next.




Here are some screenshots I did during the painting process so you can see how i painted it.



Hope you like it... maybe some comments and suggestions? Some things I should change?

[Matthew]

Hey
That looks cool, good work. I don�t have any ideas what to add more thou.

Matthew

[Tronbot]

So maybe I should leave it as it is?

[Matthew]

oh yea, I think so, very nice work. :)

Matthew

[UkiTakuMuki]

im not sure about the eye-candyness of the lighting.. but it looks great allright ^^

somehow i feel the teal-green lights could be dimmer.. since i dont think anythings in front of the craft to cause such a high-contrast reflection... dont u think?

now its as if theres very strong orange and green light source.. almost overpowering the scene.

now that i see it, the orange is okay.. acuse of the fireball.. the green... i dont think i would make the lighting so harsh.. esp on the underside.. ^^

hope i was of help.. great design btw, very cool. i dig thte cockpit area most

[francmidi]

Hi, and welcome. I'm not sure, but I would try to darken the orange reflections near the spaceship a little and restrict the illumination to the areas near the explosion (hm, my dictionary-english is terrible, I know so again in german: versuch mal die �berstrahlung der Schattenseiten nur auf die Bereiche in der N�he der Explosion zu begrenzen und auch die orangenen Reflektionen an den Tunnelw�nden in der N�he des Raumschiffs etwas zur�ckzunehmen - vielleicht nimmt das etwas vom Bonbonfarbenen.).

Nice pic.
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[maxetormer]

I am no pro but here are my two cents
This a paint over for the glass refleccions on ur ship, i hope it helps
also it migth help to the overall feeling of the image
if u clean up the gradients on it
use the lasso tool and a soft brush if u want clean gradients and hard edges


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[Tronbot]

maxetormer: wow, that's really cool.... thanks!

and thanks a lot for your comments, matthew, ukitakumuki and francmidi, too !

[maxetormer]

No problem i was very fun to do the cristal of ur pic i am glad u liked my chages post more work if u do more, i will gladly take a look at it
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[Immortal_Souls]

Nice work Tronbot!~ I love the intensity of ur work!!!
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[Tronbot]

thanks, immortal_souls =)

@maxetormer: i'll try, but, unfortunately, i'm currently working on BIG webdesign project, so time for drawing is almost 0%