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Adamant
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PostPosted: Sat Oct 18, 2003 3:44 pm     Reply with quote
Hi all,

Here's a pic I did the other day just for fun. Nothin' special, but I had fun doing it. From time to time I get the big idea to turn a few of my wild imagings into comics so here is a fictional cover to test out a comic digital painting style. I'm finding that I can paint much faster and easier now so a full digital comic may become a reality but probably not any time soon.

Let me know what you think of the style.

Cheers.


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PostPosted: Sat Oct 18, 2003 5:17 pm     Reply with quote
This is really cool, looks like it should be on an NES cartridge. What it needs in a few spots is some structural definition, mainly in the faces of the top-left and bottom-right guys. Their faces look a little plain and shapeless. I think the piece could use some texture overall, too, especially in the metal and clothing. I really like it though, as I said it's kind of a throwback to classic arcade game artwork.
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PostPosted: Sat Oct 18, 2003 6:40 pm     Reply with quote
Eh? EH?

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PostPosted: Sat Oct 18, 2003 7:10 pm     Reply with quote
Very nice! I agree with Tinusch on the fact that it could use a bit of structural definition. I'd say try and seperate your lights and shadows into two distinct areas. Maybe layout your painting with a two-value system. Then you can come in and consider your cast and modeled shadows to smooth things out.
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