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Chungui
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I don't know speak in english.... (tu sabes)...please give me your opinions.
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Santiago Colomo
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Gordillo
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| Posted: Thu May 25, 2000 3:49 am |
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Its so fine "Amiguete"!!!
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kurisu
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| Posted: Thu May 25, 2000 4:29 am |
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Welcome, Santiago 
I like your picture very much! The character is nice, the costume, lighting and colors work well.
Some criticism (just my opinions!):
- The grass: Did you want the space between the bottom of the image and the grass? It makes the grass look strange to me. Also, the color - what if the green was desaturated (less colorful)? It might draw more attention to the character that way.
- The legs: Everything about the character is very detailed - except for the legs. They look unfinished compared to the rest, in my opinion.
- The background mountain: I like how you blurred the background as it gets farther away - but, the brush strokes to the right of the character look too detailed to me - and distract my eyes when looking at the picture. Maybe if they were blurred a bit?
I really like the atmosphere and the character! Great job!
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Drorak
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| Posted: Thu May 25, 2000 8:38 am |
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| I love the bright colors you used. It's a very nice pic. |
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Chungui
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| Posted: Thu May 25, 2000 9:00 am |
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Thanks a lot for your opinions and suggestions. I do agree with you, kurisu, and i try to get better next time.
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IKhelix
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| Posted: Thu May 25, 2000 9:33 am |
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That is so a Dark Crystal character. Not sure if you guys ever heard of it, but it looks kinda like one of the guard dudes...
Cool tho
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Foxfire
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| Posted: Thu May 25, 2000 10:13 am |
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| Universal language !!!!! |
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StormVermin
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| Posted: Thu May 25, 2000 10:24 am |
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Guys, check this out... look at the pic. His pole that he is holding seems to go straight down (going from the top of the image to his hands) then after it leaves his hands out the bottom is seems to come outwards towards the view. Weird.
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Affected
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| Posted: Thu May 25, 2000 12:31 pm |
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| You're right! Neat illusion. |
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Ian
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| Posted: Thu May 25, 2000 2:24 pm |
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Hola! Lo siento por mi espa�ol muy malo, solo toque dos clases. Me gusta su pintura muy mucho. Nesecito la practica hablar in espa�ol (ingles es mi lenguaje primero) So how was that? Keep up the good work!!
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Golongria
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| Posted: Thu May 25, 2000 5:26 pm |
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hmm...seems like my 2 spanish classes might come in handy after all eh? oh yea, considering I live in New Mexico, I suppose it should have been handy a long time ago. Tu pictura es muy bien. Donde vivas? En Mexico o no? oh well, hasta luego!
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osk
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| Posted: Thu May 25, 2000 5:35 pm |
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| Hola Santiago, La criatura que dibujaste me parece excellente, pero todo lo demas no esta detallado. Probablemente dibujaste la criatura con papel y lapiz y lo pintaste en Photoshop, deberias de hacer los mismo con lo demas la proxima vez porque si no se ve muy mal .. pero esta bien chevere. |
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Chungui
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| Posted: Fri May 26, 2000 2:15 am |
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Muchas gracias IAN. No pienses que tu espa�ol es malo... aunque gramaticalmente un tanto peculiar, resulta bastante gracioso. Y tengo que reconocer que es mucho mejor que mi ingl�s... Un saludo y mucha suerte...
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StrangeFate
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| Posted: Fri May 26, 2000 2:57 am |
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hmmm a mit me gusta asi, hace destacar mas el character del resto, el cielo tambien esta muy bonito, lo que me fastidia un poco es una linea en la pierna izquierda que pasa de la pierna hasta encima de la ...camisa ?
perso me gusta, tiene colores muy alegres. |
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